Nowadays people are favor to do multiple stuffs, among the tasks they are selecting easy one to come across. I immensely disagree that people consume too much time on personal enjoyment doing things they like to do rather than performing stuffs they must do. I feel this way for two main reasons. First, the graph of accustomed time will increase by doing the UN-necessary stuffs. Secondly, at the end the people will confronted too much problems when they focused on not useful things.
To begin with, people should pay attention on those things which clarify their life from problems and circumstances that will cross their life. One of the most important thing which every person should look over on it is time. As we know time is tremendously important for managing the stuffs which we are heading ahead. However, it is nice when people spend time on things which are meaningful to life instead wasting time on useless things. For example, great moments achieve through outstanding strive. Last year i supposed to consume time on study for exams which were back of the door, i wasted time on things which were not beneficial for me, once exams are entered i was like what to do first. Thus, it was the only reason i experienced bad exam's days in my whole life.
Secondly, as i mentioned earlier people should carry out useful things until they could bring positive changes in life. doing related life things gives great feedback to the person's life. Ancestors says a great person are those who strive on things which has splendid effect on their life as compared UN-necessary things they do. moreover, i learned that first go for the things which make your life easier in the rest perform personal enjoyment things. This could lead you to have a great and steadily life in the future.
On the whole, spend time on things which has first priority in life is amazing. I feel this way for two main reasons. First, it may help to save our time. In addition ,for each problem we can yield solutions which we are facing ahead in the life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, i feel, i suppose, in addition, on the whole, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 13.8261648746 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1684.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 358.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70391061453 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29262743809 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519553072626 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.7593668993 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.1904761905 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0476190476 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333972874164 0.236089414692 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106263078213 0.076458572812 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129257160275 0.0737576698707 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223447168298 0.150856017488 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.15117935035 0.0645574589148 234% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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