Comparison is often made between the present and past life days, ease, challenges and comfort that was and that is now. Life has always been a matter of debate over time and it would be wrong to look judgementally at the aspects as a boon or curse, as a comfort or discomfort without apprropriate and some valuable obvious reasons to be taken into acount. Below is some light thrown on the topic.
"Old" days as the word suggests lacked comfort, ease, time management and lastly but important one "technology". It took years to people to realise the need of life making easy but when it happened, everything became necessity with the ease. For example, imagine the earlier days when the earth's temperature used to be too cold, people did not have air controller to control the room temperature and had bonfire only to keep them warm throughout the night. We can imagine how difficult the life was at that time. Ever imagined our ancestors travelling in cart, bicycles or on horses, spending days sometimes months to reach their destination. They could have never imagined that life would be easier some day but it is now, we have buses cars, trains, metro, bullet trains, aeroplanes to travel any corner around the world in few hours or few days.
Falling sick has been a part of time but think of the days when our ancestors spent months in pain or even died because of some unknown disease due to lack of diagnostic tools, inappropriate medicines or lack of doctors and other medicinal amenities back at that time. On the contrary, these days we have ambulance emergency service, doctors available almost after every Kilometre, medical shops opened at every street. Not only this, furthermore we have electricity or power backup in hour houses to lit our house in the dark night hours, unlike our ancestor times. Access to all the parts of the world with internet, telephone, mobilephones or television anytime, while earlier it used to be letters corresponded back and forth to communicate.
Summing up the entire narration, we can come to a conclusion that with the evolution of time and technology, our life has become more easier, more comfortable with more time management, which in turn we can utilise in learning various things further. And, with days to come life would be more easier than what it is now.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 310, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'earths'' or 'earth's'?
Suggestion: earths'; earth's
...mple, imagine the earlier days when the earths temperature used to be too cold, people...
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Line 7, column 130, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...ime and technology, our life has become more easier, more comfortable with more time manage...
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Line 7, column 289, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...r. And, with days to come life would be more easier than what it is now.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, lastly, look, so, while, for example, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1947.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 398.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89195979899 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76072577008 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58040201005 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 621.0 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.65487582 48.9658058833 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.8 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5333333333 20.6045352989 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112008635114 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421283809926 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446445995735 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0790416259499 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516944375168 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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