over the last few years, according to marked changes in the life style of human beings and also rapid development of technology, some people support that our life has been easier today than the past when our grandparents lived while others point out that these significant alters may make our life more difficult and full of stress. However, I am also of the opinion that life today is easier and more comfortable than the past for some reasons.
One important reason behind this issue is that the advent of modern technologies could meet individuals' different needs and conduct their life in an easier route. For instance, in the past, our grandparents, spent a lot of time on cooking for their family in their kitchen, but nowadays people prepare their food in the microwaves for just five minutes. Therefore, in the past, all works were absolutely time-consuming, but today people perform their works without wasting time. However, we should not ignore that in the past people had been living healthier than today. Additionally, the invention of new machines can facilitate our life rather than our grandparents' life. As an illustration of this, consider the following example. I remember that my grandmother had to wash all clothes manually in the yard by difficult conditions, but today I have never experienced washing clothes by hand, I just throw my clothes in the washing machine, add some powder, press the start button and run my washing machine. Consequently, inventions, like washing the machine, help effectively people to live easier than the past.
Moreover, I do believe that with development of science, people live more comfortable and healthier than the past. It means that nowadays, scientists could discover new methods to cure and treat different diseases, which were the killer of many humans in the past. For example, today people can cure some illnesses by laser without any pain; they can even go to their work after using laser and do not need to stay home for many days. Furthermore, today people have easy access to hospitals and clinics with a lot of well-knowledge doctors, but in the past people had to travel to other cities (another city) for visiting a doctor that not only took them a long time to travel but also was considerably costly for them. As a result, developing science in different areas could bring ease and convenience for life today.
Essentially, although we live easier and more comfortable than our grandparents do, we can never ignore to some negative effects of life style today. In overall, from my vantage point, the positive points outweigh than the negative ones and help us to live easier today.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Over
over the last few years, according to marked...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2221.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 445.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99101123596 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67626769714 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516853932584 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 689.4 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.2096104267 48.9658058833 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.647058824 100.406767564 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1764705882 20.6045352989 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76470588235 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18214755774 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071248709891 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051999947917 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134638826693 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422417828006 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 11.7677419355 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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