Today modernity of life, we see a different level of being living, either it may be too tough or may b so easy to handle, but yes, if I talk about our grand parents' life, it is obvious that we are staying, really in a comfortable position. They face the time, when even there is no field of any advancement. Likewise: they had no computers to operate things, there were no luxurious cars for travelling and even in many places, there is absence of lights too.
First, I would like to point my above reason that; now days, we simply accomplish our targets in sitting in a single room, in front of a tiny screen and can control our routine stuff accurately, if it is for a communicating purpose and to achieve our office work, our far-ancestors never saw this kind of relax-able machine to managed their life. It is so smoothly to practice lots of techniques under a machine, but our grand parents worked so hard, to filled up their requirements.
Secondly, in 21st century, we have great type of transport, including: cars, buses, trains and air plane as well. Our far-fathers never ever felt this comfort in their time, they traveled by walk or by bicycle. To illustrate, my grand dad showed me once his picture and I still remember, there was a little broken cycle behind him and he kept telling me about bicycle that i really miss my old transport and I was just shocked!.
lastly, in present day of life, we have a light source, by which we access the areas extremely easy instead of to put a lamp on one hand and do the routine in night times, like our grand parents done before, it hears so quite but when you face the reality, you will know then what is comfort or discomfort.
Hence, to sum up my points, basically our grand parents faced the tough situation, thou we can not imagine our selves as them. I think, they are the real heroes of of life and I accept this statement with my soul, that grand-ancestors know the factual meaning of life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 309, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Likewise,
...n there is no field of any advancement. Likewise: they had no computers to operate thing...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Lastly
...d transport and I was just shocked!. lastly, in present day of life, we have a ligh...
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Line 9, column 162, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: of
...them. I think, they are the real heroes of of life and I accept this statement with m...
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Line 9, column 270, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...stors know the factual meaning of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, lastly, likewise, may, really, second, secondly, so, still, then, well, i think, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 358.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48882681564 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53378439421 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603351955307 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.1344086022 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.0933371837 48.9658058833 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.090909091 100.406767564 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.5454545455 20.6045352989 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0909090909 5.45110844103 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0853410685254 0.236089414692 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0328771037224 0.076458572812 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0304500093483 0.0737576698707 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0511335616453 0.150856017488 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228134365842 0.0645574589148 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 11.7677419355 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.0537634409 147% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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