TPO-08 - Independent Writing Task
Television advertising is a major source of advertising nowadays as television is used widely in urban as well as rural areas. But are television advertisements directed towards young children are good for the society at large or it should be banned for the betterment of the society. Certainly, some people if asked would agree that these advertisements should not be allowed, while others would say that the question is double-edged due to a great deal of questions involved. As far as I am concerned, I disagree that TV advertisements directed towards young children should not be allowed.
First exquisite point to be mentioned is that these adversitements create awareness among the society about various useful products related to young children. To have right knowledge about the products like child body care, medicinal products, child food products etc is vital and every parent must be aware of that. Mt own experience is a great example for that. One of my friend's baby is 3 years old, few months back he got some diarrhea related problem, initially my friend was so much confused what to do and where to seek help, then she remembered about the advertisement she watched for such type disesase. She immediately rushed to the nearby pharmacy store and bought the ORS solution powder and gave to her child and this way she sould mange to cure her child. If she have not watched that advertisement then her child might not be cured immediately.
Having discussed the importance of creating awareness in the society, let us now move on to another aspect that it helps important informations related to child as well as parents. If any new product launched in the market related to them, mostly parents came to know that through TV. This way they can ease their child care. Some companies keep on enhancing the products like child carts, child carrying holders etc which are the most important things for parents and they help them a lot to take care of their children when outside.
In addition to aforementioned points, it has myriad of importance for those living in rural areas. In rural areas there is not much source of advertising souces to reach at that level. Nowadays televisions are widely available and is a very good souce of entertainment, so people prefer to watch it daily. Hence it is an important source of information to them.
In summary, I utterly believe that, TV advertisements directed towards young children should be allowed in the society. This is because it not only helps in creating awareness among the people about child care but also it is good for child's health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 778, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...e sould mange to cure her child. If she have not watched that advertisement then her...
^^^^
Line 7, column 307, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...nt, so people prefer to watch it daily. Hence it is an important source of informatio...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so, then, well, while, in addition, in summary, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2175.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 442.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92081447964 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75986293695 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536199095023 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 674.1 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9079152868 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.75 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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