It would be wrong to say that technology has made people less creative that too an era, where Mars landing has already been done. Technology is the mother of invention, invention which assist us in our day today life. Yes, we've reached the stars far away in the sky which our ancestors once saw with their naked eyes. 21st century, called an era of technology has always been a surprise to human race in almost every field, from science to biology, geography to the infinite universe which seems to be twinkling as a star in our eyes everyday before we go to sleep.
Technology is the demand and need of future, as well as present. For Example,Through 3D-2D games, playstation and Xbox kids can start to think in the most imaginative and creative directions. They can see galaxies and planets right away from their computer and laptop screen; thereby giving more visualization and more clear picture of concept of science and innovation.
Internet as another result of technology, being as one of the biggest necessity necessitates it's use in order to be an exampler in any field that children will ever desire.
Art, photography, animal species, new courses, musical instruments, almost everything can be learnt online. For example, various companies are offering online couses for children as well as adults in all fields like art, creating games through mathematical concepts etc. Children have access to enormous and ample amount of talent throughout world with just one click anywhere. They can get to know the types, kinds and the latest technology, art, music that is in trend. Furthermore, they these free online courses and surfing on internet has proven to be the biggest tool for young generation including those who all cannot afford the tuition fee of some courses.
With the aim learn, share and grow, technology has always proved to be a blessing. Playing games online, painting, clay pottery and origami online has helped children to adapt technologically, evolve with the creativity and has futher helped to be future ready to surprise world with another upcoming technology. As, youth is the future of any country and hence is the technology. So, more the child learn more is the development of human race.
- TPO-06 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 80
- You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think she should get a jobWrite a letter to this friend. In your letterSay why she would not enjoy going to collegeExplain why gettin 70
- TPO-31- Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the pastUse specific reasons and examples to 70
- TPO-09 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 76
- People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities?You should give reasons for your answer using your own 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 224, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: we've
...h assist us in our day today life. Yes, weve reached the stars far away in the sky w...
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Line 1, column 535, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...s to be twinkling as a star in our eyes everyday before we go to sleep. Technology i...
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Line 3, column 77, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Through
... future, as well as present. For Example,Through 3D-2D games, playstation and Xbox kids ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, so, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1863.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 372.0 407.700716846 91% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00806451613 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65825693313 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612903225806 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8189733466 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.588235294 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8823529412 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.35294117647 5.45110844103 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112115174892 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0343485295355 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0274583872659 0.0737576698707 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0599198764329 0.150856017488 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0126119207889 0.0645574589148 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.