As technology is one of the invention that made our life easier than before. It has also, made the accessing for the information is easier which could be used by an infant. Personally, though, I believe that technology has made the infant more creative through different apps they can possess within into a different communities. I feel this way for a specific reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, creativity is using a small objects to create a big one which is caused by the technology through learning.
Learning is not by only getting the information but also by discovering and understanding it. There is a lot of invention that using technology such as the internet and the electronic devices including smart phones, tablets and laptop. Exploring the child a cell phone is like exploring a new world.
First of all, giving the child a phone connected with internet will enable him to discover a world of information and getting a lot of skills. For example, when the child ask a question and you let him to find the answer by his/her own. Seeking for the information in a wide world such as the internet will help the child to get a logical sense by choosing the correct answer. Asking the child to find the answer of a question such as how the universe is formed is one of the examples that will help him to discover the world around him/her and starting to questioning it.
Secondly, the game is very good for a child it will make him be able to form a strategy and plan for his/her own life in a logical way. Learning the child to play a chess is so helpful in learning tactics. Online games such as video games is so good for imagination and analysis. Letting the child to watch the anime movies which holds an idea about solving a problem related to the community.
In conclusion, technology is really so helpful in learning the infant and letting them facing a different environment.
Facing a different environment is like shocking to the brain which would help them to think. Thinking is the beginning of the creativity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As technology is one of the invention that...
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Line 1, column 318, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'community'?
Suggestion: community
...hey can possess within into a different communities. I feel this way for a specific reasons...
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Line 8, column 119, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a logical way" with adverb for "logical"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... strategy and plan for his/her own life in a logical way. Learning the child to play a chess is ...
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Line 19, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ning of the creativity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, for example, i feel, in conclusion, such as, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1733.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 367.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72207084469 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66708364412 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479564032698 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.0 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.610853181 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2105263158 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3157894737 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52631578947 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105535055288 0.236089414692 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0348251324786 0.076458572812 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378179322872 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0541145964929 0.150856017488 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526166511833 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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