In my perspective, the Internet has a lot of benefits for human beings such as providing people with massive amounts of data and information. There are many online courses which help busy city dwellers to educate. Moreover, you can access to community's you admire through the Net. Last but not least, once not only gets the information he or she wants but also they can simply obtain information, no matter where are they.
First, thanks to the Internet, learning is no more difficult. Many universities offer online programs which are not required to regularly participate in classes, and they can also get a degree at homes. Apart from busy folks, students who cannot afford to pay for a university, now are able to pursue their fields of interests. Besides, the Internet enables people to learn when they prefer, so there is no obligation to start a class at 8 AM!
Second of all, many virtual communities have been made in the Net to assist members. For example, I am a developer, and it is common for me to run into problems. Fortunately, there a lot of websites that computer programmers join together to answer each other's questions, and share information. I sign up the site called " stack overflow ", and honestly, it has helped me resolve bugs in my codes. Plus, a wide range of reform groups has started to exist on the Internet which has significant influences on our daily life such as pushing governments to reduce the emission of greenhouse gases.
Ultimately, aside from abundant materials that the Internet provides, utilization of it is also convenient. For instance, imagine you are wondering where is the capital of Iran? Tehran or Mashhad? The hardest part of finding the answer is unlocking your smartphone, and open the google website. As you google your question, you will get the response straight away. Whereas, in the gloomy past days, you faced with many hardships to discover an answer. For example, once was required to refer a library, and appeal a librarian look up which book would reply to your question! it is undoubtedly unbearable!
For all the reasons that I have stated, I believe The Internet has furnished us with astonishing means to access knowledge. Online courses play an essential role in modern societies and are going to educate the majority of people. Moreover, using communities on the Net, one can contact with experts to resolve his or her problems, and all of this contribution requires no more effort than just a click!
- TPO 9 -Independent task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 86
- TPO-13 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The extended family (grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 81
- TPO-16 - Integrated Writing Task 76
- TPO-11 - Independent Writing Task Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?Use specific reasons and examples to support you 90
- TPO-11 - Independent Writing Task Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?Use specific reasons and examples to support you 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 576, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...hich book would reply to your question! it is undoubtedly unbearable! For all ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, honestly, if, look, moreover, second, so, well, whereas, apart from, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2074.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 422.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91469194313 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73713813296 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601895734597 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 657.9 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0423646983 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7619047619 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0952380952 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.19047619048 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198946557583 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515396633311 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500086621091 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106184774003 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532332529642 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 86.8835125448 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.