TPO-12 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There has been a debate circulates around the topic and many people think that choosing specialize subject is better than diverse knowledge. In my opinion, in case of successful carrier diversified knowledge is better than specialized knowledge. I am going to bolster my tenet by following reasons.
First of all, Study more subjects creates more way of passion or interests. For example, before studies in colleges on specialize course students developed their interest in a specific course, like engineering or doctor etc. Students study different subjects in school, for example, in the case of study engineering, students need to study math, physics, and chemistry, because those are the basic knowledge which will be needed in college. So throughout school study students grow their passion for a carrier by studying various subjects.
In the college students need to study different subjects because every engineering occupation is connected. For example, during my civil engineering course, we learned programming languages which were not our core subjects. But those subjects are needed, for example, those civil engineers working on some designing software they need those specific languages to develop the software. In the same way, if a mechanical engineer working on a car they need basic electrical engineering knowledge and vice-versa. So, eventually diversified knowledge help students to choose their carrier path and help them during the study.
In the job markets, peoples need various skills like management skills or presentation skills and personality development skills and those skills students learned during their college study. An engineering student learned about marketing management and personality development for the future job prospects. For example, when an engineer changes his carrier, targeting higher studies in MBA or change their job, engineer to marketing manager need those skills. Thus different subject knowledge helps people in their job search and in their carrier. Diversified knowledge also helps peoples to open their mind. A broad knowledge answers their confusion and can show a new path to solve the problem.
On the other hand, some people argue about the usefulness of diverse knowledge. They would say that knowledge of different subjects can cause confusion and thus knowledge can be lost their main importance. Sometimes students were forced to study those subjects and some subjects students didn't need in their carrier. But I would say that study different subjects creates passion in the students and actually help students to think about the problem and inspire them. Various knowledge can help to choose a job or carrier after's one mind.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 89, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to specialize'
Suggestion: to specialize
...pic and many people think that choosing specialize subject is better than diverse knowledg...
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Line 5, column 169, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to program', 'to programme'.
Suggestion: to program; to programme
...my civil engineering course, we learned programming languages which were not our core subje...
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Line 7, column 462, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...to marketing manager need those skills. Thus different subject knowledge helps peopl...
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Line 7, column 611, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[4]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'broad knowledge'.
Suggestion: Broad knowledge
... also helps peoples to open their mind. A broad knowledge answers their confusion and can show a ...
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Line 9, column 289, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...ose subjects and some subjects students didnt need in their carrier. But I would say ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, so, thus, for example, first of all, in my opinion, in the same way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2296.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 417.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50599520384 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7220010717 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453237410072 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 686.7 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5734344071 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8260869565 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1304347826 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13043478261 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124906995154 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480538659464 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405996556904 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0900465013827 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448554208016 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 10.9000537634 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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