Family plays vital role in development of children on various aspect - personal, social, intellectual development, and from the past, human being are living with family and community. However, there is fervor debate, nowadays, is extended family is as significant as in past. Some people believe, today, extended family is as important is in the past, but I believe that it is better to have small family nowadays.
To begin with, nowadays, due to globalization in recent days, people have to migrate various places for jobs, study or other purposes. Because of it, it is inconvenient to move with all family member along with and it is difficult to find job for all family member in one place. Thus, having a small family reduces such burden. For instance, My father lives in Kathmandu, where he works as bank manager along with our single family, whereas my uncle lives in Pokhara because Uncle have been transferred to Pokhara for 10 years. Therefore, he has taken aunt and cousin in Pokhara. Further, my grandparents live in butwal, place where my dad and uncle had reared.
Second, single family provides better quality of life. As we know that most people want to have some private hours, they don't want to be disturbed by others. Single family provide such environment. Small family have less member, so they have less member to care. However, in a big family, we have lot of member, so we are always busy looking after various member. For example, when we go to our grand parents house during a vacation of about 1 month. My parents and Uncle are usually busy at that time, kids always hang around them and my grandparents always criticize them. I can see the adversity in their faces.
Moreover, Monetary need is last justification, but not least. As we know that when extended family live together, there is a bickering about who is spending for various needs. Because in extended family, many single family ( family of my father and uncle) live under single roof and eat on the same kitchen, father and uncle have to allocate certain amount for those needs. But while doing so there was always a quarrel, making a hostile environment in the family. However, nowadays, as their family are apart, there is healthy relationship between them since they have to deal with their needs separately.
In conclusion, in today's world, there are various advantages provided my single family required my people to run their life smoothly. Therefore, I insist that people should focus on having single family.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 268, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...is extended family is as significant as in past. Some people believe, today, extended f...
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Line 5, column 122, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...e want to have some private hours, they dont want to be disturbed by others. Single ...
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Line 7, column 217, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: family
...Because in extended family, many single family family of my father and uncle live under singl...
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Line 7, column 223, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e in extended family, many single family family of my father and uncle live under...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2090.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 425.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91764705882 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51597641452 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 675.9 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.8009785926 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0833333333 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7083333333 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58333333333 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123998511935 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403474194325 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371714684166 0.0737576698707 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0805485737825 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489737096021 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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