Family brings the happiness of the person's life. In the human life, not only parents but also other family member play a substantial role in their life. I disagree with the statement that join the family is less significant in the present than it was in the past because of a few specific reasons will be explored in the following essay.
To begin with, in today era, the huge in my country lives in join family because of love among the family member always connect to each other. In addition, in any bad or good conditions, each person of the family helps to each other. For instance, after my father death, my uncle and aunty raise me and my brother, they never feel that I am not their daughter but aunty always gives me love as mother and uncle love me as a father. The Large family, I do not feel lonely and boring. Join family is good value in the person life.
Furthermore, a person shares their feeling and problem with cousin because of he can put more trust on his cousin than friends. Cousin one kind of our brother and sister and they does not wrong think about his brother or sister. A person is raised with their cousins and most time spends together such as playing the game, studying and enjoy the every moment together. If any problems then they are helping to him, take some secret talk and thing. A young person in life some of the problem he cannot says to parents but he can share with their sibling and cousins, they care easily understand and help him.
Moreover, a person easily passes time with grandparents. I like to most of the time spent with my grandparents they always tell me the story and share their experience about their life, so, I enjoy to spend my time and talk them. Grandparents through me learn the culture and ritual things. The most lovable people in my life are my grandparents.
In conclusion, the extended family is better than nuclear family because of each family has their own importance, they bolster to each other in any situation, fun and enjoy with cousins is magnificent, grandparents teach us a good thing about the life. All of this reasons I disagree that in the present era, extended family has less important than past era.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 36, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
Family brings the happiness of the persons life. In the human life, not only paren...
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Line 3, column 68, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_I[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'because he' instead.
Suggestion: because he
...s their feeling and problem with cousin because of he can put more trust on his cousin than f...
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Line 3, column 179, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'do'
Suggestion: do
...kind of our brother and sister and they does not wrong think about his brother or si...
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Line 3, column 471, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... talk and thing. A young person in life some of the problem he cannot says to parents but h...
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Line 4, column 192, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'enjoy spending'.
Suggestion: enjoy spending
...heir experience about their life, so, I enjoy to spend my time and talk them. Grandparents thr...
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Line 5, column 260, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... us a good thing about the life. All of this reasons I disagree that in the present ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1796.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 395.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54683544304 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32573227266 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483544303797 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 559.8 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.602612283 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5263157895 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7894736842 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36842105263 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169181525861 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593836343422 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748306023623 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113641797424 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0783094234238 0.0645574589148 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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