Humans are a social creature and can not live alone in society. However, iving in a world that is developing with remarkable speed, people have less time to share with their families. Also, with the economic boom, it is not uncommon for young people to live far from their parents and other relatives, which is an inevitable trend in higher level of social mobility. Whilst it seems that living in an extended family is unnecessary and even impossible at present, I would like to suggest that the importance of the extended family has not faded.
First and foremost, being together with other relatives strengthens the concept of family. Although members in a big family may live in different parts of the world, and they are distant related to each other, they still have common ancestors and inherits the same family traditions. Hence, they can find many common points between each other and collectively remember the older generations and celebrate the unique spirits in their family.
Secondly, family members makes people less lonely in society. Ironically, as the world is becoming increasingly connected thanks to the advent of technologies, people are feeling more isolated. The Internet and computers have taken up the time for face-to-face communication and interaction. It is also more difficult to find reliable friends as competition in society is so fierce that every one is working hard for their own sake. On the contrary, in a family, people are brothers and sisters to each other, there is no fight for realistic benefits in a family and members are willing to build an intimate relationship. When they are together with their families, people feel secure and a sense of belonging.
Admittedly, there are some justifications by those who argues that the extended family is no longer important, since today people do not need the help from other family members in order to survive. In the past, for instance, people need to grow food and manufacture living materials together. Nonetheless, still I affirm that relatives are always ready to offer a hand when others in the family are in need. Without their generous help, people can hardly get through the difficult times in their life with ease.
Due to the aforementioned ground, I do not believe that the significance of the extended family has been smaller today than in the past.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, may, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, still, then, for instance, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1972.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 391.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04347826087 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71068617621 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53452685422 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 637.2 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.215402204 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.555555556 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7222222222 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38888888889 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10823744141 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0384589465459 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404272035244 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0773315885267 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419098386174 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.