TPO-13 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The extended family (grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some people have a good relationship with their extended family and they consider them as a valuable instrument to live better. This brings us an arguable question whether the extended family loss its importance at present time or not. As far as I'm concerned, I am of opinion that extended family is not important than past. The reasons behind this point of view will be discussed in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, people intend to spend their leisure time with only their wife and children. Nowadays, in fact, people go to cinema to watch a movie together with their friends not with his cousin. They buy tickets merely for their children and wife when they travel to other country in summer vacations. However, in past, individuals took a journey with their grandparents because they believed in grandparents brings enjoyment for them in trip. Therefore, all of these determine that people's interest is not for spending their free time with grandparents, aunts and so forth and the extended family lose its importance in today's people life.
The second reason that support my viewpoint about extended family lose its importance is that people lose connection with their grandparents, uncles and aunts. This is because individuals currently are really busier than past and spend their whole day at job in order to gain money and after their arrive from their job, if they are not tired, they dedicate some time for helping to their children in their education such as giving help to do children's school assignments. However, individuals do not pay attention to their grandparents whether to see they are healthy or not. People do not spend time to meet their cousins, instead spend time with being with their wife and children. Therefore, people in the twenty-one century live in such a condition in which they disregard to existence of grandparents, cousins and so forth.
The last reason, humankinds do not help when they want to make decisions. Humankinds in the time of deciding to which places and countries travel they decide solely and make a plan for their trip with their wife rather than with their uncles or aunts. People who want to get married with somebody do not consult their uncles or aunts in order to get assistance and advice from them, while in the past, adults consulted their aunt about partner of their future life. Moreover, nowadays juvenile do not speak with their uncles before deciding to choose a university major in order to gain information related to situation of marketplace of academic subjects, whereas when my generation in past sought advice of uncles, cousins or aunts in their serious decision making. So, as you can see, subjects do not get assistances in the time of making important decision from their grandparents, cousins, aunts or uncles.
In conclusion, according to above-mentioned reasons, I would say that human-being’ life was encountered many changes. One of the changes is that roles of the extended family is faded, because of spending their spare time with their own families, losing connection with grandparents and cousins and so forth and because of not making decisions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 247, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
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Line 2, column 313, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
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Line 4, column 297, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'somebody' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
...e who want to get married with somebody do not consult their uncles or aunts in or...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, really, second, so, therefore, whereas, while, in conclusion, in fact, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 88.0 52.1666666667 169% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2632.0 1977.66487455 133% => OK
No of words: 522.0 407.700716846 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04214559387 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77988695657 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69799277523 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463601532567 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 792.0 618.680645161 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.6753507846 48.9658058833 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.333333333 100.406767564 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8571428571 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52380952381 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169712057757 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720481796377 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492895080771 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118705682919 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04030146337 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 11.7677419355 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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