Nowadays as every part of life, not only family life but also culture has been changing. The extended family (grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past. I totally agree this idea for several reasons and ı will state this reasons in the following sentences.
To begin with, these day families consist of father, mother and children which is called nuclear family. After children marry, they prefer to live alone in their own homes. As this family life have changed, the houses size have also varied. For instance, in the past people were living as a large family and it was lead to have very huge homes for every individual of family. But now familes are smaller and homes are smaller. People prefers to stay out than to spend time with their family. They do not care their parents and they let them to be alone when they are old.
Secondly, in the past extended family was really significant for people to waste time together, to share memories, to grow up children. New born child was cheerfulness for specially grandparents which was healty also for children who never feel alone. However, recently children do not have any possibility to waste time even their parents because of their busy life which leads to get out of order sociaty.
Last but not least, when you have a large family life, you should learn respect the others, be patient againist the others. İn a large family to obtain something takes time a little. But, family members can learn to overcome with problems readily which helps people survive every condition of life.
To sum up, the large family is less significant now than it was in the past because of above reasons. People have become unpatient each other and family life does not meaningfull like before. Woman is work life also like man which causes nuclear family.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 572, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...let them to be alone when they are old. Secondly, in the past extended family wa...
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Line 4, column 73, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to respect'
Suggestion: to respect
...e a large family life, you should learn respect the others, be patient againist the oth...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, for instance, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 320.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76875 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2444027602 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0067333858 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.3157894737 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8421052632 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84210526316 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203387156465 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734033334755 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106736174421 0.0737576698707 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131680444578 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0877587530935 0.0645574589148 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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