Travel to another city or country is a big concern for many people around the world, because people spend their money and time. On the other hand, some people move a lot and they are totally fine with travel to another spot, but there is a mutual concern for all of them and it is having more benefit of that trip. People have always been looking for an amazing area to travel to.Going outside the country has some advantages and disadvantages. In my point of view, travel to another country is better than travel to another city in the same country.
First and foremost, people can be familiar with new cultures and different foods and ceremonies. For example, there are too many differences between Iran and United States. Getting a visa for an American is easy and they can go to Iran fast. Also, Iran is a cheap country with a strong culture. The trip between US and Iran will help American to be familiar with an abused country with a strong culture. As a matter of fact, many Americans think that Iran do not have any forest or something like that. After that trip, they can be familiar with the history of Iran and try many Iranian foods.
Second of all, going out of the country will help people to learn a second language. Learning another language is a positive point for people. Being able to speak in another language is wonderful for people. Additionally, many people start to study a new language after a foreign travel, because they did not notice that how much they need to be expert in another language before that. For instance, my father went to China three years ago. He was motivated to learn Chinese after that trip. He told us there are many opportunities in China, but I cannot use them because of my language. After a while he was good at Chinese and he started to trade between China and Iran.
Last but not least, going to another country will help people to find new friends. Each person has some abilities and some opportunities to find friends. Going outside the country and thinking outside the box will help people to improve their community. In another word, more new people will create more opportunities to find a friend. For instance, one of my friends was super picky and she could not communicate well. Her father bought a ticket to Turkey for her and she went there for couple of weeks. When she came back, she had a boyfriend, who was from Turkey. She told us that guy was different and I was looking for a different one.
To sum up, although going to another city in the same country has benefits, going outside the country and thinking outside the box has more benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 381, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Going
...ooking for an amazing area to travel to.Going outside the country has some advantages...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, second, so, well, while, for example, for instance, as a matter of fact, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2152.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 471.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56900212314 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32178977497 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.44161358811 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 684.0 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0294552782 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8571428571 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8214285714 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.60714285714 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151496259229 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435616224895 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432650253484 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0886064904543 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544783272824 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.48 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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