In today's life, people stuck and busy too much in their routine, so that, they are not able to get time for being travelling, in addition, if there will be a lot of problem they face in their planning, every body acquire extremely difficulty in these situations. Thus, I strongly condemn that it is necessary to travelling in their own area of comfort zone rather than to locate a new foreign place. There are many reasons for this like: knowing all the costs of the places, many of the relatives are living in all over the local area and no need to book a tourist guy for the visiting purpose.
To begin with my first reason, it is the matter of fact that, local economy costs you so cheap, as if point out at the Asian countries, they are relative very cheaper as compare to the Europe ones. Also, as being a national, you do not require neither passport nor visa to travel and can easily be find a lowest price vehicles and travelling tools.
Furthermore, living in a place where all your friends and family is besides you, adds more advantages in the planning. To illustrate, last year, I and my family visits the Punjab, due to my cousin's wedding and I still remember that, we did not waste our money for the local moves and stayed at their house, in stead of, reserve the room in the expensive hotel. Therefore, our tour was very en-joyful as far as, not costly to us.
In last, but not the least, there now-a-days, a trend starting to hire the tourist boy, which shows you the places, whose are not familiar to you, like: Niagara falls, the Taj mahal and many of the wonders of the globe. Obviously, you have to make arrangements before check-in in these places and you will need a man or person whom causes arrangements for the trip, because of the rules can not be follow at the same time, it takes lots of preparation for the new unknown places.
To conclude, people should look up into their first priority for what purpose they are going to travel, perhaps not only for the visit new place, in fact, some humans goes for the relaxation period as well, but do not posses to waste their money too.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 157, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of problems'.
Suggestion: a lot of problems
...avelling, in addition, if there will be a lot of problem they face in their planning, every body...
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Line 1, column 313, Rule ID: IT_IS_JJ_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'travel'?
Suggestion: travel
...trongly condemn that it is necessary to travelling in their own area of comfort zone rathe...
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Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t reason, it is the matter of fact that, local economy costs you so cheap, as if ...
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Line 3, column 169, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...untries, they are relative very cheaper as compare to the Europe ones. Also, as be...
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Line 3, column 305, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...r visa to travel and can easily be find a lowest price vehicles and travelling to...
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Line 4, column 307, Rule ID: IN_STEAD_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'instead of'?
Suggestion: instead of
... local moves and stayed at their house, in stead of, reserve the room in the expensive hote...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, look, so, still, therefore, thus, well, in addition, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1726.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 388.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44845360825 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2944803852 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582474226804 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.1344086022 174% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.7138156438 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.909090909 100.406767564 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.2727272727 20.6045352989 171% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8181818182 5.45110844103 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153229479328 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604196764371 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401991474741 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0844302497757 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294276496805 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 11.7677419355 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.87 58.1214874552 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.0537634409 159% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.247311828 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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