TPO 16- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In fact, the way of traveling has turned into controversial issue during recent year among people who spend their holiday in trips as far as many tour offices have founded in order to guide people; besides, they propose special packages containing hotel, tickets, etc. Some people if were asked would agree with the statement that traveling in a group is much more enjoyable than other manners, others have negative attitude toward this point of view. As far as my memory helps I am in agreement of latter throng because there are many reason causing the team trips to be more attractive including finding friends, observing better place and experiencing less dangerous positions; although, in such a trip we should be on time.
Actually, interacting with others is counted as the most significant factor which appeal us to select traveling with others. Albeit some people prefer to spend their time solitary, I would rather to communicate with other. Not only does the time become more delightful but also I can use their knowledge which have been gained before such as addresses or high quality restaurant.
Undeniably, leaders have been taught in prior experiments; besides, they have announced by their colleague; therefore, joining to a team will decrease the perilous occurrence over the trip. Moreover, as mentioned above, they have a comprehensive guideline which not only preserves us encountering risky circumstance but proposes the most beautiful place here are not identifies by ordinary tourists.
Although, there are many positive factors which encourage me to register trips on relevant institutes, I really can't stand some proud people; furthermore, being on time is so difficult especially when you are in holidays. Actually adaptation to new behavior is such hard that lead many people to be regretted to even participate in a teamwork
All in all, according to the both advantages and disadvantages I definitely will participate in tours which are navigated by leaders which is caused me be happier in such a depressed world. In addition, one cannot neglect the fact that both members and leaders contribute us to experience a safe trip; however, it is hard to ignore the fact that being in a group have exclusive problems.
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- Essay topics: TOEFL TPO 40 - Integrated Writing Task 90
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- TPO 33 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 532, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'many reasons'.
Suggestion: many reasons
...ment of latter throng because there are many reason causing the team trips to be more attra...
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Line 13, column 113, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... trips on relevant institutes, I really cant stand some proud people; furthermore, b...
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Line 13, column 343, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...retted to even participate in a teamwork All in all, according to the both advan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, in addition, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1901.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 365.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20821917808 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80626594284 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613698630137 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.1344086022 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.6125433001 48.9658058833 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 172.818181818 100.406767564 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.1818181818 20.6045352989 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7272727273 5.45110844103 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0862088716765 0.236089414692 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0351750030216 0.076458572812 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343995180467 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0434370323438 0.150856017488 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036898518814 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 11.7677419355 167% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 58.1214874552 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.1575268817 159% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.53 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.01818996416 123% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 10.002688172 170% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.0537634409 151% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.247311828 166% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.