TPO-17 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most advertisements make products seem much better then they really are.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Nowadays, all companies use advertising to promote their products. It became essential feature of any commercial process in the recent time. I do agree with the statement that more advertisements make products seem much better than they really are. I will explore the reasons for my stance in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, it has been known that most brands and famous products depend mainly on vast and continuous campaigns for advertising and creating a fancy image about their products. However, the reality of live tells us these psychological effect is just to tempt people to relate to their products, which could be unreliable or not trustworthy. I personally have a bad experience with such deceiving companies when I bought a tablet form online site of a brand that is known of promoting its products in continuous way in all sorts of media. After using their product, I discovered that it was far from being a reliable gadget as they claim. Therefore, these advertising is meant to attract your attention to a goods that usually do not match with all the fancy words that describe the products in their advertising campaigns.
Furthermore, sometimes small companies or factories which really produce a high quality product do not have the financial capabilities to launch advertising like those of big cooperation. As a result, there is no fair or just competition in the market. The giant chains bombard you with different types of ads day and night, so most people tend to buy from these big brands or names. People usually like to jump over the bandwagon and keep themselves with the famous brands. I remember that long time ago I bought a sweeter which was nearly half the price of any famous brand. I still have this sweeter until now and it proved to be of the highest quality despite of the cheap price.
Admittedly, some people may argue that advertisements are necessary for promoting any products and it the customer or the client who decide which product to choose to buy. This seems sound logic, however, we have to take into consideration that the big giant companies do not play in a fair just way, and they monopoly the market for themselves because of their unlimited financial abilities. The governments should impose some regulations to control and regulate these kinds of trade to give the chance for the small companies to have its share of the market.
In conclusion, I believe that most advertisement are not telling the honest truth about their products because they focus on attracting more clients and profits more than quality, besides their share of the market do not help the small companies or factories to flourish and take their fair share of the market.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 710, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a good' or simply 'goods'?
Suggestion: a good; goods
...g is meant to attract your attention to a goods that usually do not match with all the ...
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Line 3, column 515, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... I remember that long time ago I bought a sweeter which was nearly half the pric...
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Line 4, column 393, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of their unlimited financial abilities. The governments should impose some regul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, however, if, may, really, so, still, therefore, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2253.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 459.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90849673203 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70823539367 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516339869281 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 693.9 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.0532027037 48.9658058833 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.578947368 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1578947368 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84210526316 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204566183132 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674860822121 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100093795861 0.0737576698707 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129226683859 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0888344315633 0.0645574589148 138% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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