Nowadays, students spend more time at school, course and GYM than at home.
Because, of more interaction in class and attending different activities with their classmates they are more influenced by their friends.
As far as my view is concerned I disagree with the view that students are more influenced by teachers than friends , I will elaborate my view with following reasons:
To begin, undoubtedly teachers play vital role role in students life by providing knowledge, expertise and valuable opinion which their friends are not able to provide because they are at same age and knowledge, but still some scare to share every idea with their teacher because they scare of consequences ,on the other hand they can share easily with their friend's.
For instance, when I was at school I was sharing my feelings and opinion with my best friend ARZO, after many years of graduating still we are best friends.
Furthermore, students think that friends can keep their secrets ,on contrary teachers are responsible to share some of problem with students parents.
Moreover, students more influenced by their peers life style . for example, usually students ask their parents to purchase same Brand dress like their friends on contrary, they will never influenced by teacher clothing style.
To conclude, keeping In view forementioned reason students more Influenced by their friends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1184.0 1977.66487455 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 221.0 407.700716846 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35746606335 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.48103885553 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63599329604 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 212.727598566 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552036199095 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 618.680645161 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 142.522585929 48.9658058833 291% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 148.0 100.406767564 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.625 20.6045352989 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.875 5.45110844103 200% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.53405017921 176% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316873912213 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170493412647 0.076458572812 223% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762091913653 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165836277488 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0746057007481 0.0645574589148 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 11.7677419355 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 10.9000537634 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 86.8835125448 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.247311828 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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