Information is today's way of relationship. Internet and many other resources are used as new resources.
Some people think that being well-informed and get information from many different ways is necessary. Othrs believe taht
it will be shameful to ask from different resources. I personally believe that it is better to ask from different resources in today's world,I did the same when I was immigrating.
First of all, I believe that when we ask from so many people and we use so many resources we will add to our opinion. Every thing is going to be add up on our experience.For instance, I wanted to immigrate to Canada I had to use internet and ask so many people who immigrated.Most importantly for me was the experience that they had, it helped me a lot.
Moreover, I believe that if we read through magazines and books we will have idea of immigration. I bought a book about Canada and geography in Canada. It helps me to understand much better. For example, even when I was taking citizenship exam that old information helped me after few years.
Furthermore, We have to show something in future to our kids and it is the better and best thing that we can teach them in early childhood. We as a child need to bring up with this habit. We need to get information from every sources in order to be successful. And if we use this habit, our child will be successful at the end.
In summary, from all I the reasons I stateted above I strongly believe that we should be knowledgeable about anything that we are doing.
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Essay evaluation report
to be add up
to be added up
Sentence: Othrs believe taht it will be shameful to ask from different resources.
Error: taht Suggestion: ?
Sentence: In summary, from all I the reasons I stateted above I strongly believe that we should be knowledgeable about anything that we are doing.
Error: stateted Suggestion: stated
flaws:
The third reason is out of the topic.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 16 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 277 350
No. of Characters: 1216 1500
No. of Different Words: 139 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.08 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.39 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.69 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 70 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 54 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 41 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 33 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.312 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.674 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.438 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.357 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.598 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.204 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 69, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... well-informed and get information from many different ways is necessary. Othrs believe taht ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 140, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...from different resources in todays world,I did the same when I was immigrating. ...
^^
Line 5, column 171, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...is going to be add up on our experience.For instance, I wanted to immigrate to Cana...
^^^
Line 5, column 277, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Most
...t and ask so many people who immigrated.Most importantly for me was the experience t...
^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'well', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in summary', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.18 0.229887763892 78% => OK
Verbs: 0.19 0.158761421928 120% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0866666666667 0.0866891130778 100% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0433333333333 0.046263068375 94% => OK
Pronouns: 0.13 0.0685040099705 190% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.123333333333 0.118717715034 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0233333333333 0.0351676179071 66% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.88607683566 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0433333333333 0.0309702414327 140% => OK
Particles: 0.00666666666667 0.00188951952338 353% => OK
Determiners: 0.0466666666667 0.0887237588012 53% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.02 0.0209618222197 95% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0166666666667 0.0139019557991 120% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1529.0 2387.08602151 64% => OK
No of words: 274.0 408.028673835 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5802919708 5.86048508987 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.48200974243 91% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.273722627737 0.338922669872 81% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.200729927007 0.251872472559 80% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.160583941606 0.174417080927 92% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.127737226277 0.112833075102 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88607683566 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 212.727598566 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503649635036 0.524397521467 96% => OK
Word variations: 48.6899337106 59.2087087015 82% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 17.125 20.5533526081 83% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6640267549 48.84282405 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5625 120.699889404 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.125 20.5533526081 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.625 0.644075263715 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.5376344086 154% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 37.1979927007 45.7405998639 81% => OK
Elegance: 0.899082568807 1.45489161554 62% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269350526133 0.300154397459 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.116632716515 0.103427244359 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0989426057095 0.0752933317313 131% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.601428140036 0.497263757937 121% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.20179315969 0.151897553556 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109685421725 0.114077575197 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653268334514 0.0781384742642 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.211856887596 0.336927656856 63% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0577620282208 0.067059652881 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148067590251 0.210909579961 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553893560787 0.0618886996521 89% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8870967742 59% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.91756272401 163% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.42114695341 71% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.