" Who doesn't like to watch news nowadays? "News is one of the most informative way to gather information about what's happening in our society. I agree in order to be well- informed, a person must get information from many different news resources. Having different news resources people can gather more information about the current events that is happening in our society. Furthermore, to understand more deeply my opinion, few reason will be discuss in each paragraph.
To begin with, one of the advantages for having different news resources is it is more informative. The reason for this is, gathering more information can help the society to develop unity in such a way that, people can help each other out. For example, in the past our governor commit corruption in the government, he stolen money from the people by increasing the taxes but because of watching the news and able to gather data and information the people united as one to have the governor impeach from his position, on the other hand, it can be disadvantageous because if people gather different information it will not be reliable anymore.
In my view, the distribution of the news to different resources should be distributed equally, so that, the people have the better understanding of the what the news is all about, how it effect the society and so on. Equally distribution of the news to different resources is important in such a way that, it can give better insights of the news that people can get the clear information. For example, in my own experience, I watch CNN a lot to get to know what's going on in our society but then I was thinking CNN news has also lack of information, too so I have decided to watch NBC news can give additional information so that I can get the whole picture of the topic or event.
Another thing, having different resources can be a effective way of communication to people in such a way that, people can able to communicate well to each other to talk about a certain topic, if the news is all about the society with a particular project also, in this way that project can be done completely with a better communication. For instance, in my neighborhood the president of the home association implemented a rule for having security camera in each houses to have a safe neighborhood, however, the residence people communicate each other to have the project successful. On other hand ,it can be disadvantageous to some people who lives in the community due to lack of money and unable to participate on that said project so, eventually the people that can not participate are unhappy and unable to get the security camera, but, there are kind people whole donated the security camera for those people that doesn't have one.
In my conclusion, having different resources can be informative, it can give unity to the people and it can consider be a effective way of communication, thus giving a better understanding of the news, Some people will oppose this statement because of lack of resources and people are unable to understand clearly what the news is all about, people will think the news is very unreliable that can give a vague information to people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, then, thus, well, another thing, for example, for instance, in my view, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 9.8082437276 234% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 80.0 52.1666666667 153% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.0752688172 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2642.0 1977.66487455 134% => OK
No of words: 550.0 407.700716846 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80363636364 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84273464058 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89452261298 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.387272727273 0.524837075471 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 858.6 618.680645161 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.1344086022 179% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 120.622533366 48.9658058833 246% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 176.133333333 100.406767564 175% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.6666666667 20.6045352989 178% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 5.45110844103 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159553744799 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915605232794 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120498288317 0.0737576698707 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120055899976 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713272839981 0.0645574589148 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 11.7677419355 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 58.1214874552 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.1575268817 170% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.0537634409 163% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.