Successful people usually have unique path in their life different than ordinary people. I agree with the statement that successful people try new things and take risks. I have many reasons for my stance which I will explore in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, some people prefer to to climb the ladder of success step by step, while other individuals have non unusual methods of handling things. They are often more adventurous and not afraid to make some calculated risks. For example, look at the greatest inventors throughout the history, you find that they always unique and have the guts to go against what is common or prevalent int their times. A vivid example of those smart and courageous persons is Isaac Newton, which had used unprecedented techniques that led at the end to draw up the theory of gravity.
In addition, the success is associated with taking risks. If some one have followed the traditional methods because he is not willing to take risky or unknown way, he will reach to traditional way, not something impressing like those who are self-confident to cross the boundary of known to new areas. A vivid example from the history is the famous traveler Christopher Coulombs who discovered the new world or the new continent. If such a man did not have the curiosity and the sprite of adventure, he would not even think of making such a dangerous journey.
Admittedly, some could argue that those who take risks and do new things are more liable to failure or disappointment because they follow unknown and i non investigated methods. However, I believe that without those people who decide to to beyond the limits our world would not have such discoveries and inventions in all fields of life, so I think those people who like to take unfamiliar ways in their lives have more chances for success.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that such individuals who have the tendency to take risks and try new things have better chances for success because of their unique way of thinking and their inclination to explore the unknown. .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, while, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 354.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87005649718 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63818119165 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525423728814 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.8284131601 48.9658058833 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.142857143 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2857142857 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199249231963 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818388660477 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769307218815 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121626968962 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507555503014 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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