When asked about the approaches to life, many people have the idea that change and new experiences bring us a meaningful life. However, others take the view that staying the same and not changing the usual habits is the better way of the life. In fact, both approaches have its advantages and disadvantages which are listed as follows.
To begin with, some people believe change and new experiences provide us a meaningful life because when we adapt to the change and new environments, we must face the difficulties and try our best to overcome them. This process not only builds our personality but also gives us an exciting and meaningful life. What’s more the change around us improves our spirit of adaptation and an independence. They benefit us in competing for survival in the society. Let us suppose we always stay the same and do not change the environment. Then if someday we have to step into another environment, how can we adapt to it?
Secondly, trying new things led to success. Let’s take Albert Einstein as the first example. As we all know, he invented the theory of Quantum Mechanics, which is so different from what we have already known in physics. This theory led to his personal success in the field of theoretical physics. However, almost all of us ignore the fact that he also did really well in traditional physics. He made his discovery based on his research on traditional physics. A more recent example is Steve Jobs, who is the chief executive officer of Apple. We usually oversee his achievement in the innovative Apple system and applications. In fact, without deep knowledge of basic computer system or electronic devices, he cannot put his innovation into use. Actually, successful people do take risks after they have done what they have known for sure.
On the other hand, people who hold an opposite view consider that sticking to the usual habits is the better way of life. They point out that the longer you keep the same habits, the more adaptive you are and you may live comfortably. They point out that usual changes make you acquaint with nothing, and then it is impossible for you to have a happy life. In order to see this point clearly, they give us a good example: If you change your environment every month, you have to always change your habits and customs. Then how can you live happily?
As far as I am concerned, the advantages of change carry more weight than those of staying the same because I need to improve my adaptation which is the Only way that I can survive in the society. Also, taking risks led to success which needs in our life.
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Essay evaluation report
flaws:
More arguments wanted in the third paragraph. There are two examples with only one sentence for argument.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 22 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 26 15
No. of Words: 457 350
No. of Characters: 2086 1500
No. of Different Words: 230 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.624 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.565 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.451 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 135 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 94 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 54 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 37 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.577 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.972 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.654 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.276 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.48 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.197 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
When asked about the approaches to life,...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...antages which are listed as follows. To begin with, some people believe chang...
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Line 3, column 334, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding change'?
Suggestion: the surrounding change
...g and meaningful life. What's more the change around us improves our spirit of adaptation and a...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...environment, how can we adapt to it? Secondly, trying new things led to succe...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... done what they have known for sure. On the other hand, people who hold an op...
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Line 9, column 158, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... improve my adaptation which is the Only way that I can survive in the society. A...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'really', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'in fact', 'to begin with', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.192607003891 0.229887763892 84% => OK
Verbs: 0.165369649805 0.158761421928 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0875486381323 0.0866891130778 101% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0583657587549 0.046263068375 126% => OK
Pronouns: 0.103112840467 0.0685040099705 151% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.101167315175 0.118717715034 85% => OK
Participles: 0.0311284046693 0.0351676179071 89% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.57555276204 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0272373540856 0.0309702414327 88% => OK
Particles: 0.00389105058366 0.00188951952338 206% => OK
Determiners: 0.091439688716 0.0887237588012 103% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.011673151751 0.0209618222197 56% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0252918287938 0.0139019557991 182% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2638.0 2387.08602151 111% => OK
No of words: 457.0 408.028673835 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.77242888403 5.86048508987 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.48200974243 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.301969365427 0.338922669872 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.212253829322 0.251872472559 84% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.159737417943 0.174417080927 92% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.089715536105 0.112833075102 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57555276204 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501094091904 0.524397521467 96% => OK
Word variations: 57.297002857 59.2087087015 97% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6684587814 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.5769230769 20.5533526081 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2255321119 48.84282405 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.461538462 120.699889404 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5769230769 20.5533526081 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.615384615385 0.644075263715 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.54480286738 108% => OK
Readability: 38.8023060091 45.7405998639 85% => OK
Elegance: 0.994047619048 1.45489161554 68% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272523455547 0.300154397459 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.113134732407 0.103427244359 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0827482116681 0.0752933317313 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.453806997476 0.497263757937 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.174259959424 0.151897553556 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889663639877 0.114077575197 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530040229498 0.0781384742642 68% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.278532505689 0.336927656856 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0789644073456 0.067059652881 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170034167645 0.210909579961 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428304062662 0.0618886996521 69% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8870967742 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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