TPO-22 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Everyone has their own opinion on social and political issue going around, and they have all rights to express them in front of
people. Some might think it is totally fine for teachers to express their vsocial and political views in front of student. However, in my opinion
, teachers should not make their social and political views public to students. I think this for couple of reason, whcich I will discuss those
in length in below paragraphs.

First, student may judge teachers based on their social/political views. If teacher makes their views known to students, students would
make their opinion about teacher based on their views. This whole thing could affect the student and university in negative way. For example,
I remember, when I was in my under grad school in India. We had one teacher who doesn't used to like him because he used to think that, prime mister is baised towards castism in our country. Most of the student used to like our Prime Minister, so knowing this views about our teacher, made lot of student avoid taking his class. So, I think, teacher should not make their social/political views known to students as it could affect them as well as students curriculam.

Second, student could get influenced by their teachers views. Teachers are idea for students, student also learn life lessons along wit course with their teachers. Knowing teachers view on social/political issues could get influenced by it, and they would not develop their own views on these issues. For instance, one of my friend from our school was so much influened by our history teacher's view on Maratha community, that Marathas have given more contrubution in getting independence for country. He still is of same view and doesn't accept other community people's work in freedom. This makes me sick that he has not developed his own opinion based on reading or other resources but he followed his teacher's view till date. Hence, I think, during school days it is very easy to get influenced by others and teacher being role model for most of students this make it more easy.

All in all, with all reasons that I discussed above, I believe that teachers should not make their social/political views public to students for all above mentioned reasons.

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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'still', 'well', 'for example', 'for instance', 'i think', 'as well as', 'in my opinion']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.243498817967 0.229887763892 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.163120567376 0.158761421928 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.080378250591 0.0866891130778 93% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0449172576832 0.046263068375 97% => OK
Pronouns: 0.111111111111 0.0685040099705 162% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.137115839243 0.118717715034 115% => OK
Participles: 0.0496453900709 0.0351676179071 141% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.53923395906 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0236406619385 0.0309702414327 76% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0354609929078 0.0887237588012 40% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0283687943262 0.0209618222197 135% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00709219858156 0.0139019557991 51% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2264.0 2387.08602151 95% => OK
No of words: 383.0 408.028673835 94% => OK
Chars per words: 5.91122715405 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.342036553525 0.338922669872 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.245430809399 0.251872472559 97% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.143603133159 0.174417080927 82% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0757180156658 0.112833075102 67% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53923395906 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498694516971 0.524397521467 95% => OK
Word variations: 53.7686859382 59.2087087015 91% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.1578947368 20.5533526081 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3112888134 48.84282405 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.157894737 120.699889404 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1578947368 20.5533526081 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.842105263158 0.644075263715 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.5376344086 198% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 44.7009756768 45.7405998639 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.34814814815 1.45489161554 93% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303281789742 0.300154397459 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.111246812425 0.103427244359 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0883678970663 0.0752933317313 117% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.534516635866 0.497263757937 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.233916039456 0.151897553556 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11621069309 0.114077575197 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760992765947 0.0781384742642 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.166481777614 0.336927656856 49% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.102019704251 0.067059652881 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168996360473 0.210909579961 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507021242486 0.0618886996521 82% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8870967742 50% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.91756272401 203% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.42114695341 71% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 8.0 2.75985663082 290% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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