people confront multiple task during their life period. So, while accomplishing those tasks, there is an argument between doing the task rapidly, being prone to mistake or doing it slowly, avoiding mistake. Personally, I agree with the prompt positioning to work promptly due to various reason.
First of all, we, in present time, face various task. If we act all the task with much deliberation and time, so can't complete our task in time; as a result, we hoard a pile of unfinished task, which can be so burdensome to our mind. I, for instance, have to work on various task at present day. I have to take care of my study, do my job, and other additional home activities. If I do all those task painstakingly, I mostly have some task uncompleted during entire day; thus, while going to sleep, it pursue me.
Second, Time is money may be another justification. People, usually, wanted their task be done rapidly as like as repairing car, delivering food, presenting office report. For doing these activity rapidly, they are basically satisfied by our service and try to pay high. For example, a bank in Nepal Nepal Bank Limited is a first choice of bank for most Nepalese. The main reason behind it is it's fast customer service. Furthermore, it also brings more customer and customer may become accustomed of our rapid service, a major factor to be a solvent company.
However, I don't want to say that all work should be done hastily and without heed. Because it's heedlessness can cause serious outcome, there are certain task which we should take more time than usual like preparing our thesis report, maintaining our vehicle, but we spent most of time on banal task, which can overcome through makeshift method and focus our time on serious potential task.
Finally, due to above mentioned ground, I suggest that people should focus on doing their work in promptly. The two main riddle- deal with myriad task and lucrative purpose- can be etiasily solved by taking an account of doing task hastily.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
people confront multiple task during their lif...
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Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ask with much deliberation and time, so cant complete our task in time; as a result,...
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Line 3, column 503, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pursues'?
Suggestion: pursues
...ire day; thus, while going to sleep, it pursue me. Second, Time is money may be ano...
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Line 5, column 183, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this activity' or 'these activities'?
Suggestion: this activity; these activities
...od, presenting office report. For doing these activity rapidly, they are basically satisfied b...
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Line 5, column 295, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: Nepal
...try to pay high. For example, a bank in Nepal Nepal Bank Limited is a first choice of bank ...
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Line 7, column 12, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...to be a solvent company. However, I dont want to say that all work should be don...
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Line 7, column 126, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cause its heedlessness can cause serious outcome, there are certain task which we...
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Line 7, column 155, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'tasks'?
Suggestion: tasks
...use serious outcome, there are certain task which we should take more time than usu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, may, second, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 345.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83768115942 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55318721706 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597101449275 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0494909056 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7222222222 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147016659111 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506175619689 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373970471658 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0981172297559 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462037734909 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.