Undoubtedly, teenager stage is one of the most important level of every children. Some people are very concern about this. Many of them believe that it does not need to get a part time job children while others disagree. From my point of view, I think that parent can help their teenagers by inducing them to getting a part time job because of learning social skills, promoting communication ability and progressing a scent of independency.
Firstly, teenagers can learn some social skills by choosing a part time job. In terms of part time when a students are teenager, they can increase their different abilities like making a decision. The parent can help their teenager in this situation. For instance, in a part time job in a day many accident may be occurred that a teenager should be select a correct way to do well his or her job and it can provide some benefits for teenager when he comes to adult. Further more, the teenager can experience another skills like leader shipping . They can know how to be a good leadership. Thus, part time job will bring some advantages in adulthood for teenagers.
Secondly, the communication ability can be promote by getting a part time job. In fact by having a job people must be contacted to various people and during the time the communication ability can progress gradually that is very essential for teenager. They have no any stress in contacting to other people in adulthood . in addition, if a teenager choose a job he will make a good decision about his or her job in future. Teenagers can reveal their tendency in terms of job. Therefore, a successful adulthood can be grantee by choosing a part time in teenager stage.
Finally, in each person finding a job or having cause to appearance of scent of independency. When a teenager experiences this scent the entrancing in adulthood will become very easy. Teenagers can practice in this status to know how to be independent in economic aspect of life. Besides, they can proper themselves for being a good manager in future. Thereby, having a part time for teenagers can lead to increasing self confident in adulthood.
In sum, in contrast of some people I believe that parent can help student by giving them a part time due to learning social skills, promoting communication ability and experiencing the scent of self confident.
- TPO 39 - Independent taskDo you agree or disagree with the following statement?In the past it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure, successful future.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, i think, in addition, in contrast, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 9.8082437276 224% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1943.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 401.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84538653367 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78595411102 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.456359102244 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 616.5 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.5301589158 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4782608696 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4347826087 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5652173913 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.5376344086 470% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282257319289 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100294150153 0.076458572812 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581919382161 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180158362373 0.150856017488 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050525251606 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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