The importance of professors and their inevitable influence on the students is not doubtful and worth contemplating. Some people might hold the view that increasing professors’ salaries will not have much effect on enriching the education. However, this idea sounds concordant to me, and my arguments will be substantiated by following paragraphs.
First and foremost, by increasing the salary professors' who have two job, since they are not able to fulfill their needs with one, will have a higher motive to quit the other job. Consequently, a professor will concentrate more on his teaching strategies and put an effort on focusing and evaluating his students to find if he is conveying his knowledge in the most adequate manner. Moreover, the scholar who is not working another shift has more time to prepare himself and update his knowledge by reading and probing new information of the subject.
Another important reason worth mentioning is that, with higher salary, other people who have a high desire to be professor and do not pursue it because of the unfair salary that they get will have a stronger motivation to do so. As a result, this community of scholars gets bigger, which will be beneficial for both sides: students and professors. This will lead to a successful University, in which students will have a broader spectrum of choices for selecting their professor and a community of satisfied professors.
Last but not least, being a professor is not an easy duty and, indeed, they deserve a high salary. One is able to be a professor after years of struggling and effort. In my belief, reaching to the professor level, if not harder, is not easier than being a Engineer or Doctor. One should get a doctorate to attain this level and, of course, should never stop learning. Since a good professor is the one who upgrade his knowledge, in a world that changes every day.
To wrap up, due to aforementioned ground, I think professors' salary has a great impact on the quality of the lectures that they are presenting. With a good salary they won't be forced to work two jobs and will spare more time preparing and possessing best strategies that work will based on their students. Furthermore, people will have higher incentive to be professors, if they achieve a higher paycheck and, in fact, professors deserve a high salary.
- TPO-21 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your ans 76
- TPO-27 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying.Use specific reasons and ex 66
- TPO-14 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 57
- Because the world is changing so quickly people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past 46
- TPO-26 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents’ jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents’ job.Use specific r 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 70, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'job' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'jobs'.
Suggestion: jobs
...sing the salary professors who have two job, since they are not able to fulfill the...
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Line 7, column 255, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...if not harder, is not easier than being a Engineer or Doctor. One should get a do...
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Line 9, column 240, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'possessing the best'.
Suggestion: possessing the best
... and will spare more time preparing and possessing best strategies that work will based on thei...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, i think, in fact, of course, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1963.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 395.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96962025316 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88427214339 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513924050633 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9278503703 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.470588235 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2352941176 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23529411765 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0835514592309 0.236089414692 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0307991928504 0.076458572812 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0281239498366 0.0737576698707 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0513207218682 0.150856017488 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0188036578905 0.0645574589148 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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