There are various factor to increase the quality of education. In that allotment, I believe salary plays monumental role to upgrade education quality.
First, Immaculate things are very expensive. Top and repudiated professor also belongs to the pristine quality and a university offers higher salary to those professor. For instance, In our highly repudiated Kathmandu university, most of the professor are regarded as highly accomplished regarding to professor of other university, in Nepal, and it is inevitable that highly skilled professor renders quality education to the students as such genius professor provide deep understanding of knowledge.
Providing higher salaries increase quality of life, so professor can give more attention about his work. Professor, for example, who are scarcely paid, may have to do other part-time job, which can be onerous; thus they can't focus on providing quality education. On the other hand, if a professor is paid higher job, then he can fully concentrate in only single job. Furthermore, highly paid professor can focus on his research and may lead to many invention and discoveries. Admittedly, We also know that research activities is directly associated with quality education.
However, some may contend that student's involvement have monumental role than professor role, but I still insists that teacher plays an monumental role. With the teacher effort, student's rate of acquiring will be higher, also he can motivate an careless student to study. Similarly, student may try harder studying with books, but depth of the knowledge he have will be lower than the knowledge gained through lecture, debate from highly qualified professor and such top professor are hired by providing ludicrous payment.
Top professor, attention in teaching, involvement in research, and increase in student's knowledge are achieved by providing higher salaries to professor. Therefore, monetary issue in professor profession have a pivotal importance for ascending of quality education.
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is it Reputed or repudiated??
is it Reputed or repudiated?? line 3= "For instance, In our highly repudiated Kathmandu university"
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'factors'?
Suggestion: factors
There are various factor to increase the quality of education. I...
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Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this professor' or 'those professors'?
Suggestion: this professor; those professors
...nd a university offers higher salary to those professor. For instance, In our highly repudiated...
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Line 5, column 221, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...me job, which can be onerous; thus they cant focus on providing quality education. O...
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Line 5, column 445, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun invention seems to be countable; consider using: 'many inventions'.
Suggestion: many inventions
...n focus on his research and may lead to many invention and discoveries. Admittedly, We also kn...
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Line 7, column 32, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...tion. However, some may contend that students involvement have monumental role than p...
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Line 7, column 107, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'insist'
Suggestion: insist
...l role than professor role, but I still insists that teacher plays an monumental role. ...
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Line 7, column 134, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... but I still insists that teacher plays an monumental role. With the teacher effor...
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Line 7, column 243, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ng will be higher, also he can motivate an careless student to study. Similarly, s...
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Line 7, column 358, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...th books, but depth of the knowledge he have will be lower than the knowledge gained...
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Line 9, column 174, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...laries to professor. Therefore, monetary issue in professor profession have a piv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, regarding, similarly, so, still, then, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 306.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6339869281 4.8611393121 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90506517107 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542483660131 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.146196539 48.9658058833 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.933333333 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.93333333333 5.45110844103 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.075451695601 0.236089414692 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0369847107103 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350315251889 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0528558573615 0.150856017488 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0208161345417 0.0645574589148 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 11.7677419355 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 58.1214874552 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.1575268817 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 10.9000537634 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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