Education plays a pivotal role in our lives. It is believed that the more knowledge we gain, the more we will success in the future. Meanwhile, university professors are an integral part of educational system. Therefore, there is a suggestion that in order to improve the quality of education, university should pay higher salaries to university instructors. I totally agree with this statement for three reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, having at a higher salary can stimulate university professors to do more research that will be helpful to their teaching. We all acknowledge that we are living in a rapidly developing world. Everything changes day by day. Therefore, university professors need to upgrade their specialization in every moment. Once they stop studying, their teaching will be obsoleted. Having a high salary will enable professors to focus on their job. In other words, like many other people, professors have to take care their families for their daily's lives. If they do not have enough money, they need to find another extra job. Thus, they cannot spend all their time or energy and abilities to concentrate on their research. My biology teacher is a compelling example of this case. He is an excellent teacher. Many of us have to admit that we gain a lot of knowledge from his classes. However, his salary is not enough to support his family. Hence, he had to work extra job as a computer technology in a center. Last month when we asked him why he did not write any biology book to provide us more knowledge. He said nothing, but we could understand that he had no time.
The second point that is worth considering is the fact that when a professor is getting enough salary, he or she will work more motivated in university projects and will be more active in class. As a matter of fact, when a person is satisfied with his or her salary will be more tended to give full attention to his or her job. Therefore, they can encourage students to study effectively. In other words, if professors perform their classes interestingly, and they can open their topics to a variety of perspectives, students will be encouraged to pay attention to their lectures. As a result, the students ‘quality will enhance as well.
Last but not least, spending money to increase the salary of professors is a responsibility of everyone. We all know that being a professor is not easy. In fact, professors take responsibility to educate youth that means they improve the standard of our lives. No one can get a degree if one does not go to the university. Having a degree enables one to get a job and to realize one's dreams in one’s life. According to this point, increasing the salary to professors is needed.
In conclusion, people have different ideas about the issue of paying more money to university professors in order to improve the quality of education. For three
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 380, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...enables one to get a job and to realize ones dreams in one's life. According to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, second, so, therefore, thus, well, while, in conclusion, in fact, as a matter of fact, as a result, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2422.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 503.0 407.700716846 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81510934394 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73578520332 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82164302273 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487077534791 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 789.3 618.680645161 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 20.6003584229 160% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.7899364552 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.3939393939 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2424242424 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84848484848 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137985702382 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0366318819929 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568726681235 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102007228524 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655406511014 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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