Nowadays, it is commonly accepted that finding new friends has an equal impact on maintaining old friends or maybe making the new friend is more major. Contrary, to this popular beliefs, there are still those who argue that old friends are just people who help us in the problems because friendly feeling and kind between old friends are very more strong and deeper. So any new friends cannot alternative to them in a hard time. I, to a great extent, disagree with this idea that keeping old friends are more important to find new friends.
First and foremost, our life is always in change, we arrive at one stage of life to the next and from one space to another and at the same time we knowing new people. Maybe sometimes it is impossible to can conserve our relationship with the old friends. For example, I have a friend at the time off we were in the first class in school. She is the really good friend for me and I like her a lot. But, now we can see together only after several months because she is the mother and has two children that should be the full-time cair from them and I am a lab engineer and should be work for all of the weeks. While I see my coworker every day, they are nice people and I enjoy to spend time with them. We have a lot of the same subject to speak about and roughly we every weekend spend together. It does not mean that I forget my old friend but it is just because of the new condition of my life.
On another significant fact, that should be taken into the consideration is that today's, because of modern lifestyle and fast rate of our world. Unfortunately, we lost some of our communication with ore old friends. For example, last year my sister go to Canada but we live in Asia so have the strong difference in hours to Canada. for example, when in Iran is morning in Canada is a night. So, this contrast in hours becoming hare her relationship with their friends in Iran. In addition, she should study hard and work a lot during the day so virtually the possibility of their communication is thin.
Finally, yet importantly, finding new friends caused to increase in wide of our beliefs and we find this opportunity to using from experience of more people. Relationship with new people with various personality led to an improvement of our social skills. While if our communication limited to just old friends we lost a valuable chance to the discovery of society. Surely, this abilities improved our friendship with the old friend.
On the basis of reasons that mentioned above, I am convinced that making new friends is very important because it is a portion of natural life and modern lifestyle and cause to growing and maturation of our character.
- For the successful development of a country, it is more important for a government to spend money on the education of very young children (five to ten years old) than to spend money on universities. 90
- In order to become financially responsible adults, children should learn to manage their own money at a young age. 76
- TPO 45: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives. Use specific reasons and ex 73
- Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 76
- life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparent were children. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 581, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'worked', 'wrought'?
Suggestion: worked; wrought
...m and I am a lab engineer and should be work for all of the weeks. While I see my co...
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Line 2, column 590, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...m a lab engineer and should be work for all of the weeks. While I see my coworker every da...
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Line 2, column 670, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'enjoy spending'.
Suggestion: enjoy spending
...r every day, they are nice people and I enjoy to spend time with them. We have a lot of the sa...
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Line 3, column 332, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...e strong difference in hours to Canada. for example, when in Iran is morning in Can...
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Line 4, column 256, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...to an improvement of our social skills. While if our communication limited to just ol...
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Line 4, column 374, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ce to the discovery of society. Surely, this abilities improved our friendship with ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, may, really, so, still, while, for example, in addition, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 52.1666666667 140% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2211.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 490.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51224489796 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70488508055 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5540952897 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475510204082 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 698.4 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4310356837 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1304347826 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3043478261 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30434782609 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242162493658 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805737552346 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0903746297559 0.0737576698707 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154154392839 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116104766544 0.0645574589148 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.