In spite of the advantages of working five days a week for shorter hours, certainly, it is more joyful to work three days a week for long hours. Someone can consciously weigh the pros and cons of each side. The explanations go as follows.
First of all, it is possible to have a fun time. When someone works only three days, it means that he can save four days for a relatively long vacation and perhaps this would be a terrific opportunity for people to organize and create timetable to move to the beach and satisfy from excellent and amusement activities like swimming, scuba diving, or walking on sand stones. Beside, a man or women probably can grasp this fortune to get pleasure from both spending time with sibling and reading a fantastic and useful book about digital camera, satellite, television, or even cell phone.
Furthermore, making a big money is another noticeable support for enjoy. Having four days free provides folk a great chance to find another part time job in other companies or factories and possibly reach to countless interest to gratify with their life. In additional, someone can use these days to learn and master new informative knowledge about internet connection and electronic business, and therefore institutes an online private corporation to make huge money via internet by assembling and selling computer to the people. It is vividly clear that numerous amounts of money aid and motivate somebody to either visit wherever or purchase whatever they want or like.
Admittedly, there are some justifications by some persons who argue that working five days for shorter time is more ideal. Mainly, people would experience a low level of pressure and anxiety, and as a consequence this may prevent from any future illness or disease. However, still I affirm that working three days for long hours is more pleased. For instance, there are large amounts of methods and facilities including meditation or sport exercise that aimed to address mentioned issue and either keep away or completely remove people's stress.
Due to the aforementioned grounds, I think all people should bear in mind that working three days a week for long period of time is better. Participating tremendous money and enjoyable time are two prime and conspicuous factors that individuals benefit from this choice.
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Essay evaluation report
flaws:
Sentence Length SD: 12.49 7.5 // it means the length of the sentences changes frequently
First of all, it is possible to have a fun time. //short
When someone works only three days, it means that he can save four days for a relatively long vacation and perhaps this would be a terrific opportunity for people to organize and create timetable to move to the beach and satisfy from excellent and amusement activities like swimming, scuba diving, or walking on sand stones. //very long
Beside, a man or women probably can grasp this fortune to get pleasure from both spending time with sibling and reading a fantastic and useful book about digital camera, satellite, television, or even cell phone. //long
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 26 in 30
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 384 350
No. of Characters: 1897 1500
No. of Different Words: 236 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.427 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.94 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.616 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 132 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 105 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 67 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 42 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.49 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.302 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.555 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.026 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 21, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'big money'.
Suggestion: big money
...ven cell phone. Furthermore, making a big money is another noticeable support for enjoy...
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Line 5, column 141, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...des folk a great chance to find another part time job in other companies or factories and...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 115, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...that working three days a week for long period of time is better. Participating tremendous mon...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'for instance', 'i think', 'in addition', 'first of all', 'in spite of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.260143198091 0.229887763892 113% => OK
Verbs: 0.143198090692 0.158761421928 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.100238663484 0.0866891130778 116% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0501193317422 0.046263068375 108% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0214797136038 0.0685040099705 31% => OK
Prepositions: 0.102625298329 0.118717715034 86% => OK
Participles: 0.0286396181384 0.0351676179071 81% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.68225500582 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.035799522673 0.0309702414327 116% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0811455847255 0.0887237588012 91% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0190930787589 0.0209618222197 91% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00954653937947 0.0139019557991 69% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2331.0 2387.08602151 98% => OK
No of words: 384.0 408.028673835 94% => OK
Chars per words: 6.0703125 5.86048508987 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.356770833333 0.338922669872 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.296875 0.251872472559 118% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.1875 0.174417080927 108% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.1171875 0.112833075102 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68225500582 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619791666667 0.524397521467 118% => OK
Word variations: 76.9591986093 59.2087087015 130% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5533526081 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.0298170173 48.84282405 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.6875 120.699889404 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.5533526081 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8125 0.644075263715 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 53.6875 45.7405998639 117% => OK
Elegance: 1.82222222222 1.45489161554 125% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274724958044 0.300154397459 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0533305577324 0.103427244359 52% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0418483173351 0.0752933317313 56% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.521933753261 0.497263757937 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.15903203068 0.151897553556 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109583400153 0.114077575197 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0951868033607 0.0781384742642 122% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.294024742582 0.336927656856 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0687799394652 0.067059652881 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184982615281 0.210909579961 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626117269352 0.0618886996521 101% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.