A job plays a significant role in our daily lives. In other words, our lives depend on our job. People believe that no one can live without a job. Therefore, people consider how many days and how many hours to work a week is more enjoyable. Each of us has our own preferences. Some people like to work three days for longer hours. However, others would love to work five days a week for shorter time. In my opinion, I prefer to have a job that allow me to work three longer days than five shorter days. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, three long working days per week enable me to have more time to study. I am a nurse. Besides working in the hospital, I continue learning to get a master’s degree in nursing in order to improve my ability and enhance my knowledge. Hence, I need plenty of time to do more research to understand my major more deeply and widely. If I work only three long days per week, I am able to use the time of the rest of a week to go to school and to go to library without worry about my job. In fact, I am really enjoyable now, because last month my boss accepted my request to work on three long days a week.
Secondly, working three long days a week allows me to save more money from commuting, and save time as well. Every day, I have to go back and forth from my house to my workplace, no matter how long I stay at work. It usually takes me at least an hour to drive. If I work three long day, I do not need to go to work every day. As a result, I can save a lot of money for gases. Likewise, I can use one hour for driving to do other things, such as take care my family, go shopping, and relax or visit my friends. Indeed, I can benefit tremendously from working three longer day rather than working five shorter days.
Last but not least, working three long days per week allow people to protect their globe from pollution. We all acknowledge that the more we drive the more we waste carbon dioxide into the environment. Meanwhile, it seems to me that in the United State everyone has her or his own car. Therefore, the rate of pollutions that people emit to the atmosphere is considerable. If we work three long days we will use our vehicles lesser than working five days per week. As a result, we are able to save our environment.
In conclusion, people have their own preferences and ideas to work for three longer days or five shorter days per week. For three reasons, which I have just mentioned above, I strongly believe that working three longer days is more enjoyable, because it not allows me to save time and save money,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 373, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...emit to the atmosphere is considerable. If we work three long days we will use our...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, hence, however, if, likewise, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, as to, at least, i feel, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2129.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 503.0 407.700716846 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.23260437376 4.8611393121 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73578520332 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32942100745 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.429423459245 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 684.0 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1570839664 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.9666666667 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7666666667 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3 5.45110844103 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385636145202 0.236089414692 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118965996234 0.076458572812 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0965203723359 0.0737576698707 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255676685748 0.150856017488 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497546634584 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 11.7677419355 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.96 10.9000537634 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.69 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 10.002688172 45% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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