In this day and age of modernization, although more facilities make life easier for anybody, people are confronting more problems as well. The question of whether people are less happy in this modern era has generated a great deal of debate among people from all walks of life. While different people have distinct ideas about this issue, in my opinion, people are indeed less satisfied nowadays. Throughout the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most outstanding reasons.
To commence with, the foremost reason why I am supporting this view lies in the fact that professionalism plays a paramount role in this modern era. Therefore, people have to work a lot more compare to the past to reach their dreams, since competence among individuals has increased and reached its apex. This simply indicates a more severe condition that people should go through and therefore more dissatisfaction.
Another exquisite reason which should mention here is that with the invention of the Internet and social apps, people are more aware of others from even different countries. This fact although provides some benefits has some negative effects as well that is people tend to compare themselves with others, especially the wealthy ones. This leads to being disappointed in your life and being jealous of theirs.
The other equally noteworthy point in corroborating this issue is that not only finding a sufficient job is much tough than in the past but also the costs of living have increased a lot. In the past youngsters just need to follow their families' careers. Also, there has not been much to pay for. In contrast, ones need to spend so many years of education to possibly find a job. A vivid example can be given to shed light on what has been elaborated above. Here I depict one of my own experiences. I have been studying for many years to be ready to have a professional job in the future, yet I could not have found any. Besides, there are a lot of things I should spend on. Things such as university expenses, entertainment, and so on.
To recapitulate, taking all the aforementioned reasons into account, it can be authentically concluded that from my vantage point, people are less happy with their life in contrast to the past since they are more pressured and stressed to find a career to cover their expenses, they have to compete more, and they are dissatisfied with their life comparing it with others.
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- tpo 30 70
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- TPO 31 Independent Writing TaskDo you agree or disagree with the following statement Because the world is changing so quickly people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past specific reasons and examples to su 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 140, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: Whether; The question whether
... are confronting more problems as well. The question of whether people are less happy in this modern er...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, then, therefore, well, while, in contrast, such as, in contrast to, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2013.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 412.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8859223301 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75613075089 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54854368932 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 635.4 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.5136366486 48.9658058833 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.65 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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