Today we are living important changes in our lives. Unfortunately, actual society in the world is focusing on material things, producing a variety of issues which are impacting our natural instincts as human beings. As a result of this, it can be stated, people nowadays are less satisfied and less happy than people in the past. In the next lines, I will provide some reasons in order to support this statement.
Firstly, we can study a very common concept, as a possible reason to support the paragraph mentioned before. Money. This could be one of the most important factors in which people are been distracted from their natural environment, in order to reach more power and domain. For example, if you get money, you can buy things, however, things are not only you can get with money, what I mean is, with money, you can move to others with the purpose of obtaining services. The point here is that you can get good things, but also, you can get bad things. Even though money could be such good for people as terrible too.
Secondly, technology, actually, people use technology to do almost everything. This is another concept could be mentioned, in order to understand how this concept has been created certain dependence in people for every activity.
For example, today everybody has a mobile phone, therefore, if your mobile device, for any reason, stop working or it crashes, your day almost is over. What I mean is, if you do not have your cell phone, you cannot make calls, you cannot get money, even though, you cannot work, and as a result of that, you will be stressed and unhappy too.
Additionally, we can mention also our dependency for living in a big town or big city. How many times do you walk in a natural place? Like mountains, hills, fields with vegetation, etc. This is one of the reasons how our natural instinct sometimes suffers a lack of this important necessities.
In conclusion, as I have mentioned before, unfortunately, people today live less happy and satisfied than in the past, because of those all styles described in the last paragraphs. Moreover, I can suggest that it is very important to be aware our actual lifestyle, whether or not we have these accommodations, trying to put in a balance what we have actually with our natural necessities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 266, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...rtant to be aware our actual lifestyle, whether or not we have these accommodations, trying to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, i mean, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1907.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 397.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80352644836 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63994269608 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508816120907 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6586387592 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.368421053 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8947368421 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36842105263 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211729876413 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690121961758 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633525374851 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113153055513 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502065331116 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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