In today's society the question of wheter is true or not that becouse of the world is changing fastly, people are being less happy and satisfied with their lives than people in the past, has become controversial in many camps and circles. Different people have distict responses to this topick based in their cutural, social or even familial background. However, as far as I concern, I think that every change in the world leads us to be happier and more satisfied than never.
To begin with, people are happier for live more. Life expectation has grownth exponentially in the lastt centure. Due developments of new technologies, it was possible to advance in medical care, deases that once was a problem, now are easely cured. Recent studies has reveal that in the next decade we will be able to cure a wide variety of cancers once for all. All advances has lead people to enjoy their lives end apreciate the third age.
Another noteworthy aspect the should be mentioned is that people are satified in see what once in the past was a dream or fiction now is reality. For instance, my grandfather never spected to live long to see that distance is no longer a problem. See a a bother or a son that lives in other state or country, travel around the word are examples that what was possible today and what makes my grandfather happy and satified. Recentily he enjoyed a trip to Europe.
To conclude, there are plenty examples to show why people are satified with the world's changing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 470, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...s to be happier and more satisfied than never. To begin with, people are happier f...
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Line 3, column 270, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'revealed'.
Suggestion: revealed
...ow are easely cured. Recent studies has reveal that in the next decade we will be able...
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Line 3, column 378, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'have', 'haven'.
Suggestion: have; haven
...y of cancers once for all. All advances has lead people to enjoy their lives end ap...
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Line 5, column 252, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: a
...at distance is no longer a problem. See a a bother or a son that lives in other sta...
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Line 5, column 252, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...at distance is no longer a problem. See a a bother or a son that lives in other s...
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Line 5, column 252, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: a; a
...at distance is no longer a problem. See a a bother or a son that lives in other sta...
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Line 7, column 98, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... are satified with the worlds changing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, third, for instance, i think, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1229.0 1977.66487455 62% => OK
No of words: 262.0 407.700716846 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69083969466 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50951513642 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595419847328 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 618.680645161 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7897433358 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5384615385 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253625494261 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849683279207 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0881911613328 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159290443711 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.077836954703 0.0645574589148 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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