Nowadays, students have to do myriad assignments, so while doing these assignments, there is an fervor debate whether the assignments should be done alone or in groups. Which method will provide optimal profit to students? To take a project, in my opinion, individually can provide conducive environment to increase student's insight.
First of all, in group project, there are numerous member and numerous member means many sentiments. Much time is consumed while addressing all member's opinion, so providing little time for doing research in main project topic. Such type of problem I have read in many article, including in the toefl passage. Further, I have such personal experience too. When I was at high school, the teacher gave a project work in topic survey of people's interest in newspaper, but as we started the project, most of the time was consumed during discussing the layout, evaluating which plan i better; thus, only limited time was allocated for doing the survey task.
Second, The egoistic problem may be another problem that cause hindrance in study during group project. People become less likely to involve in the task, which is not planned according to their accord, as a result they will not actively participate in the group project. Their egoistic problem cause a impediment in their study. On the other hand, If Student are given project personally, They do according to their volition, having no interference from outsider. They research more, probe more, helping them to the gist of the subject.
However, some may argue that having more student will represent more idea and due to more involvement of people,will be less onerous to work, but I still insist to provide project personally. In most cases, when multiple student are involved, individual cannot get insight information because feeling of more member in his group makes him torpid. If they will be fail then rather than being vituperated single wise, whole group will be blamed. It makes them indolent towards their work. And for more information, Student can ask their teacher, friends about how to approach, but Finally completing it individually.
Due to aforementioned reasons, we can see that benefits provided by single project surpasses than the benefit provided by group works. Therefore, I believe that for the best interest of students, teacher should assign project individually.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 94, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...while doing these assignments, there is an fervor debate whether the assignments s...
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Line 3, column 52, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'members'?
Suggestion: members
...l, in group project, there are numerous member and numerous member means many sentimen...
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Line 3, column 145, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'members'' or 'member's'?
Suggestion: members'; member's
...h time is consumed while addressing all members opinion, so providing little time for d...
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Line 3, column 265, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun article seems to be countable; consider using: 'many articles'.
Suggestion: many articles
...ic. Such type of problem I have read in many article, including in the toefl passage. Furthe...
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Line 3, column 579, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ssing the layout, evaluating which plan i better; thus, only limited time was all...
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Line 5, column 301, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...p project. Their egoistic problem cause a impediment in their study. On the other...
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Line 7, column 112, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , will
...ea and due to more involvement of people,will be less onerous to work, but I still in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, may, second, so, still, then, therefore, thus, while, as a result, first of all, in most cases, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2025.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 384.0 407.700716846 94% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2734375 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69275240736 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575520833333 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1373158995 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.25 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1 5.45110844103 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235949781384 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669601853731 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426723739909 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126639466166 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383660040857 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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