There is no doubt that nowadays, consulting and sharing knowledge with other people has played a prominent role in every projects. No one can deny the influence of a group of people rather than to be alone. A controversial question which is often raised regarding this statement is that, should student get to gather and share information. Some people hold the idea that by sharing knowledge, they can flourish in many aspects. However, some others may take an opposite perspective and believe that working alone are more beneficial rather than work as team work. From my perspective, the first believe is true. In what follows, I will pinpoint the most important outstanding reasons.
One of the reasons coming to mind is that less time to complete projects. As a clarification, every people have perspective, when learners get to gather and start working in parts of projects, everyone can take new comment and give a new idea in order to solve problem. Some projects takes a prolong time to do, so, by dividing assignment in parts as a team work, it makes less time to prepare it. An empirical in the Asia shows that most of Japan's student become successful in their lessons and education because of strong team work in many aspect of education such as physics, mathematics and so on. Therefore, by working as a team work, we can allocate short time in order to complete the projects.
Another important reasons is that from psychological viewpoint, by working each other, student more motivated and have a good confident to participate in team work jobs. As matter of fact, when learners encounter to a harsh condition sometimes, they become bore and exhausted. So, student as team work can encourage others to work better or recommend a new way.To illustrate my point, Some student have appropriate back round of knowledge besides, they can challenge better and organize problems, so, they can aid other who have low level of education during work immediately become disappoint.
In contrast, when the student work alone in order to complete project, the efficiency of work are less than projects that done by group of people. In other sense, learners have to face many challenge during working in projects. So, it is difficult for him/her at the same time to find methods for problems. Hence, working alone in the project not only does not have a good result but also, he/she should take a many time to complete project.
To wrap it up, it is my deep believe that working as team work job definitely improve the quality of projects because of taking less time and good motivation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 284, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'take'.
Suggestion: take
...n order to solve problem. Some projects takes a prolong time to do, so, by dividing a...
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Line 2, column 290, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...r to solve problem. Some projects takes a prolong time to do, so, by dividing assignment ...
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Line 2, column 537, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun aspect seems to be countable; consider using: 'many aspects'.
Suggestion: many aspects
...ducation because of strong team work in many aspect of education such as physics, mathemati...
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Line 3, column 362, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
...s to work better or recommend a new way.To illustrate my point, Some student have ...
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Line 4, column 185, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun challenge seems to be countable; consider using: 'many challenges'.
Suggestion: many challenges
.... In other sense, learners have to face many challenge during working in projects. So, it is d...
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Line 4, column 411, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'many times'.
Suggestion: many times
...d result but also, he/she should take a many time to complete project. To wrap it up, it...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, however, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, in contrast, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2152.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 441.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8798185941 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58257569496 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66496544374 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485260770975 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 680.4 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.994623655914 302% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0776788833 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.6 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.05 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259313902858 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826891807713 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657796682617 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156828328618 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037545491669 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.