Nowadays with the development of technology, the use of cars helps people do their tasks easier and faster than the past. I strongly believe that in twenty years humans will use more cars than today and the number of cars will increase. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss my view using some reasons and examples.
I think twenty years later the population of people in the world will increase. As a result, it causes the use of cars to raise. For example, in my country, the people’s population has increased from forty million to eighty million compared to thirty years ago. Therefore, more people need to use cars, and the number of cars has increased.
Moreover, I believe that with the technological progress, industries are improving the quality of vehicles and are using novel technologies to produce cars. Hence, it will encourage individuals to buy these cars and enjoy them. For instance, my friend has used a car for years and now he has bought a new car which more facilities and options. Also, today, most of families have more than one car to use. Consequently, in twenty years it is clear that there will be more cars to use than there are today.
To sum up, according to the fact that the people’s population is increasing and the quality of cars is improving, it can be concluded that the quantity of cars will rise.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 358, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the families') or simply say ''most families''.
Suggestion: most of the families; most families
...re facilities and options. Also, today, most of families have more than one car to use. Conseque...
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Line 7, column 177, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ed that the quantity of cars will rise.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, hence, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1129.0 1977.66487455 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 236.0 407.700716846 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78389830508 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68547475016 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 212.727598566 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512711864407 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 618.680645161 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4568318936 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8461538462 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1538461538 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 5.45110844103 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293463834702 0.236089414692 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125272120623 0.076458572812 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789419916839 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190412403479 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0914882182174 0.0645574589148 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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