TPO 38 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Leadership comes naturally: one cannot learn to be a leader.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There are so many features such as an honesty, a carism which affect people well, a beautiful face for women, a handsome face for men, speaking and teaching members of groups clearly, etc. Almost, all of these features started by the birth of their owners.
First of all, the honesty is a good kind of behaviour in all environments. All people should have that behaviour and a good leaders too. In the group projects all people should share their all information, there is not enough reason for opposite thoughts. For projects successes, manager and workers should trust to each other. And, that behaviour could be learned after birth.
Also, a discipline is a behaviour like the honesty, it is an mportant and good kind of feature. I think, the group disciplines started by boss of group and members of teams would follow their leaders. And, parents could teach and influence their young about that such as the honesty, and speaking and leading features too.
In addition, the most parts of leaders' features designed before their births. For example, some physical things like the beauty, the handsome are genetic features, these come from their fathers and mothers. And, the carism feature is related with the handsome and the beauty.
Moreover, some good types of varieties such like, a pleasure, physical power and mental health are comes from a family. In contrast, some bad mental problems like an anxiety, and any other diseases comes from older members, and these factors impact the leading. So, leaders should not have these an ill problems.
In conclusion, all of above facilities which had to been had by all leaders. And, these things must be rule in all areas where groups or teams work. Although, a few features of all features learned after, and there are some bad mental problems in DNA, the most parts of them loaded by the god.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 125, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'leader'?
Suggestion: leader
...e should have that behaviour and a good leaders too. In the group projects all people s...
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Line 5, column 59, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... is a behaviour like the honesty, it is an mportant and good kind of feature. I th...
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Line 9, column 190, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'diseases'' or 'disease's'?
Suggestion: diseases'; disease's
...problems like an anxiety, and any other diseases comes from older members, and these fac...
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Line 9, column 304, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'problem'?
Suggestion: problem
...o, leaders should not have these an ill problems. In conclusion, all of above facilit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, well, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, kind of, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 315.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90793650794 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36198583237 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501587301587 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 12.0 3.08781362007 389% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4112399315 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3684210526 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5789473684 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84210526316 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0580480040703 0.236089414692 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.022485406604 0.076458572812 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0214673846491 0.0737576698707 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0310763992493 0.150856017488 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0183855094737 0.0645574589148 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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