tpo 40
The reading passage and lecture both discussed about live in other planets. The author of the passage states that it is possible for human to live in mars and moon. On the other hand due to the lack of living condition living on Venus is inhospitable. However, the lecturer challenges the author's reasons and proposes three reasons.
First off, the author of the passage highlights that pressure on Venus is extremely higher than pressure at earth's surface. Not having been convinced, the lecturer points that base on physical facts, pressure are much lower at surface. So, based on those facts pressure at surface of Venus are more likely to be equal as pressure at surface of earth. In this case, there is no danger in order to land in Venus.
Moreover, the author of the passage declares that Venus hardly contains water and oxygen and the planet's atmosphere include mostly carbon dioxide, sulfuric acid and nitrogen. On the contrary, the lecturer asserts that although compound materials such as carbon or sulfuric acid contain at Venus, by using chemical process we can provide amount of water and oxygen.
Finally, the author of the passage contends that there are dense clouds on the Venus's atmosphere which block the sunlight reaching the surface and limited the use of solar energy. By marked contrast, the lecturer does not approve of author's third reason and say that clouds in that areas are not very thick that sunlight can be reflect and get to surface. Therefore, cells can collect enough sunlight and use for electricity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 98, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'planets'' or 'planet's'?
Suggestion: planets'; planet's
...ardly contains water and oxygen and the planets atmosphere include mostly carbon dioxid...
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Line 7, column 427, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nough sunlight and use for electricity.
^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['finally', 'first', 'however', 'moreover', 'so', 'therefore', 'third', 'such as', 'on the contrary', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.280701754386 0.229887763892 122% => OK
Verbs: 0.140350877193 0.158761421928 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0947368421053 0.0866891130778 109% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0456140350877 0.046263068375 99% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00701754385965 0.0685040099705 10% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.150877192982 0.118717715034 127% => OK
Participles: 0.0280701754386 0.0351676179071 80% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.37555616541 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0175438596491 0.0309702414327 57% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0982456140351 0.0887237588012 111% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0105263157895 0.0209618222197 50% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0105263157895 0.0139019557991 76% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1547.0 2387.08602151 65% => OK
No of words: 259.0 408.028673835 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.97297297297 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.48200974243 90% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.393822393822 0.338922669872 116% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.281853281853 0.251872472559 112% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.185328185328 0.174417080927 106% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0617760617761 0.112833075102 55% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37555616541 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 212.727598566 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552123552124 0.524397521467 105% => OK
Word variations: 54.7165786332 59.2087087015 92% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6684587814 63% => OK
Sentence length: 19.9230769231 20.5533526081 97% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6827078264 48.84282405 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 120.699889404 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9230769231 20.5533526081 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.769230769231 0.644075263715 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 48.1084051084 45.7405998639 105% => OK
Elegance: 2.38181818182 1.45489161554 164% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.300154397459 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.156606790142 0.103427244359 151% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0937259541749 0.0752933317313 124% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.608634014715 0.497263757937 122% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.152333401113 0.151897553556 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.114077575197 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0781384742642 0% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.290374082703 0.336927656856 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0790242193804 0.067059652881 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.210909579961 0% => The content is off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0618886996521 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8870967742 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 8.42114695341 24% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 13.6433691756 66% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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