Teachers are very important in everyone's life. They contribute a lot to our success in our life. Views differ considerably when it comes to the issue whether teachers were more appreciated in the past than they are today arouses much controversy among different people . Some people contend that teachers were more appreciated in the past than they are today, owing to the fact that teachers were the only source of knowledge because there were no technology in the past. However, some people disagree with this statment. As far as I am concerned, I subscribe to the second opinion for the following reasons.
First of all, teachers are appreciated today more than in the past because they broaden students horizons a lot. They seek to provide them with all the information they have to create a well-rounded generation in different aspects. In addition, they spend extra time with the students who underperfrom to get them improved by explaning the subject with funny and easy way.Hence, they make the educational process more popular for students than before. According to recent survey conducted by Cairo university stated that contemporary teachers are more appreciated by parents due to the development in their childrens' eduction, as opposed to many teachers in the past their only concern to get paid no matter if the students get the information they need or not.For example, my childrens' teacher do a lot of effort to improve the English skills for them and she even called me to explain the needs of my children education to get them improved. Thanks to the teacher, all my children speak Englis fluently now. This example illustrated the importance and appreciation of the teacher nowadays.
Secondly, thanks to the technolgy that made teacher and parents are more connected to each other than before which leads to appreciate the teacher role in students life. Teachers nowadays more connected to parents by sending them their children reports, or calling them , or sending them e-mails to inform the parents about their children performance in the school, parents feel happy about knowing every thing about their children and hence, they appreciate the teacher a lot. For example, my children teacher send me reports evry month showing my children performance and their grades and then i signed and sent it back to her. In addition ,if my son absent from school they call me to make sure if he is ok or not, moreover, they sent me a paper to invite me to parents meeting to discuss several issues regarding our childreneducation.
To put it in a nutshell, teachers today are more appreciated than before not only because broaden our children skills, but also because they become more connected with parents more than before. We should all appreciate our teachers.
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Essay evaluation report
Teachers nowadays more connected to parents
Teachers nowadays are more connected to parents
Sentence: First of all, teachers are appreciated today more than in the past because they broaden students horizons a lot.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to students and horizons
if my son absent
if my son is absent
not only because broaden our children skills, but also because they become more connected
not only because they broaden our children skills, but also because they become more connected
Sentence: Secondly, thanks to the technolgy that made teacher and parents are more connected to each other than before which leads to appreciate the teacher role in students life.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to students and life
Sentence: Teachers nowadays more connected to parents by sending them their children reports, or calling them , or sending them e-mails to inform the parents about their children performance in the school, parents feel happy about knowing every thing about their children and hence, they appreciate the teacher a lot.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to children and reports
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to children and performance
Sentence: To put it in a nutshell, teachers today are more appreciated than before not only because broaden our children skills, but also because they become more connected with parents more than before.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to children and skills
Sentence: However, some people disagree with this statment.
Error: statment Suggestion: statement
Sentence: In addition, they spend extra time with the students who underperfrom to get them improved by explaning the subject with funny and easy way.Hence, they make the educational process more popular for students than before.
Error: underperfrom Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: explaning Suggestion: explaining
Sentence: According to recent survey conducted by Cairo university stated that contemporary teachers are more appreciated by parents due to the development in their childrens' eduction, as opposed to many teachers in the past their only concern to get paid no matter if the students get the information they need or not.For example, my childrens' teacher do a lot of effort to improve the English skills for them and she even called me to explain the needs of my children education to get them improved.
Error: eduction Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: childrens Suggestion: children
Sentence: Secondly, thanks to the technolgy that made teacher and parents are more connected to each other than before which leads to appreciate the teacher role in students life.
Error: technolgy Suggestion: technology
Sentence: For example, my children teacher send me reports evry month showing my children performance and their grades and then i signed and sent it back to her.
Error: evry Suggestion: every
Sentence: In addition ,if my son absent from school they call me to make sure if he is ok or not, moreover, they sent me a paper to invite me to parents meeting to discuss several issues regarding our childreneducation.
Error: childreneducation Suggestion: children education
Error: ok Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 8 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 10 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 21 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 8 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 10 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 463 350
No. of Characters: 2272 1500
No. of Different Words: 215 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.639 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.907 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.639 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 166 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 134 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 83 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 46 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25.722 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 18.829 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.556 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.327 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.498 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.195 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 270, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... much controversy among different people . Some people contend that teachers were ...
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Line 3, column 373, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Hence
...ing the subject with funny and easy way.Hence, they make the educational process more...
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Line 3, column 762, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...ts get the information they need or not.For example, my childrens teacher do a lot ...
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Line 3, column 853, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t to improve the English skills for them and she even called me to explain the ne...
^^
Line 5, column 270, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... their children reports, or calling them , or sending them e-mails to inform the p...
^^
Line 5, column 597, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...n performance and their grades and then i signed and sent it back to her. In addi...
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Line 5, column 642, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ned and sent it back to her. In addition ,if my son absent from school they call m...
^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'regarding', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'for example', 'in addition', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.23246492986 0.229887763892 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.154308617234 0.158761421928 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0681362725451 0.0866891130778 79% => OK
Adverbs: 0.064128256513 0.046263068375 139% => OK
Pronouns: 0.102204408818 0.0685040099705 149% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.118236472946 0.118717715034 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0360721442886 0.0351676179071 103% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.70507300507 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0521042084168 0.0309702414327 168% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0921843687375 0.0887237588012 104% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00200400801603 0.0209618222197 10% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.00801603206413 0.0139019557991 58% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2784.0 2387.08602151 117% => OK
No of words: 463.0 408.028673835 113% => OK
Chars per words: 6.01295896328 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63868890866 4.48200974243 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.36717062635 0.338922669872 108% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.302375809935 0.251872472559 120% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.196544276458 0.174417080927 113% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.120950323974 0.112833075102 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70507300507 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481641468683 0.524397521467 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 54.5771904511 59.2087087015 92% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.7222222222 20.5533526081 125% => OK
Sentence length SD: 109.801110881 48.84282405 225% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 154.666666667 120.699889404 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7222222222 20.5533526081 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.888888888889 0.644075263715 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.54480286738 126% => OK
Readability: 55.9598032157 45.7405998639 122% => OK
Elegance: 1.20625 1.45489161554 83% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.401032368729 0.300154397459 134% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.151972789998 0.103427244359 147% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0908930909216 0.0752933317313 121% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.525116448769 0.497263757937 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.200031979721 0.151897553556 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160667092244 0.114077575197 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775635283119 0.0781384742642 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.422514247625 0.336927656856 125% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.13873242848 0.067059652881 207% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.275338721332 0.210909579961 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0800771389092 0.0618886996521 129% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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