When we talk about satisfactions, we usually talk about a sense of fulfilment and self-actualisation. Most of us gain those feeling in work, some people feel more satisfied with doing similar tasks all day long, indeed, we have to admit that similar tasks are less challenging, for instance, an experienced employee can finish this kind of tasks very quickly. However, I am agreeing with the statement that people feel more satisfied with having different types of tasks to do.
Employees who are used to deal with different types of tasks are more competitive in job market than those only do similar tasks all day long. It is the fact that this kind of job requires employees with different skills, such as the communication skills with others, how to understand some knowledges in a short time and how to organize their schedule efficiently. Obviously, bosses and other team members appreciate employees who have those skills, as a result, these employees will have higher chance to get promotion in their career and receive better salaries than the average. When people gain more profit in their job, they can spend more money on entertainments and buy more things which will improve their life quality, hence they will gain more satisfaction from work.
At most of time, different types of tasks is more challenging than similar tasks, some people may not like taking challenges during their life time, they are afraid of getting out from their comfort zone. But there are some people enjoying facing with challenging in their job, they gain satisfaction from the process of doing different kinds of tasks. For those kind of people, a job with similar tasks is often too boring to them, because they simply can not enduring doing similar tasks all day long.
I would like to introduce myself as an example, as a student major in software engineering, after finishing some course project, I realized that similar tasks can not make me satisfied, for example, using an specific technic to implement other's design. Instead, handing with different tasks is more excited to me, because I am curious in many different kinds of fields, and I really enjoying the process of building my own project mix with different subject.
In conclusion, different types of tasks is benefit for employees to enhance their competitive in job market, thus, leading a feeling of fulfillment in their work. And for those kind of people who quickly gets bored with similar tasks, a challenging job offers more kinds of tasks is a better choice towards them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 372, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... kind of tasks very quickly. However, I am agreeing with the statement that people feel mor...
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Line 5, column 139, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...not like taking challenges during their life time, they are afraid of getting out from th...
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Line 5, column 358, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'those kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; those kinds
... of doing different kinds of tasks. For those kind of people, a job with similar tasks is ...
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Line 5, column 462, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'endure'
Suggestion: endure
...ng to them, because they simply can not enduring doing similar tasks all day long. I w...
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Line 6, column 206, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...t make me satisfied, for example, using an specific technic to implement others de...
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Line 6, column 339, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... excited to me, because I am curious in many different kinds of fields, and I really enjoying ...
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Line 8, column 172, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'those kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; those kinds
...g of fulfillment in their work. And for those kind of people who quickly gets bored with s...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'really', 'so', 'thus', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'kind of', 'such as', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.244161358811 0.229887763892 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.146496815287 0.158761421928 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0955414012739 0.0866891130778 110% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0573248407643 0.046263068375 124% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0636942675159 0.0685040099705 93% => OK
Prepositions: 0.146496815287 0.118717715034 123% => OK
Participles: 0.0467091295117 0.0351676179071 133% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.64455934281 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0233545647558 0.0309702414327 75% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0700636942675 0.0887237588012 79% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0191082802548 0.0209618222197 91% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0169851380042 0.0139019557991 122% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2544.0 2387.08602151 107% => OK
No of words: 425.0 408.028673835 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.98588235294 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.48200974243 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.331764705882 0.338922669872 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.254117647059 0.251872472559 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.16 0.174417080927 92% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.108235294118 0.112833075102 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64455934281 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482352941176 0.524397521467 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 53.2071058205 59.2087087015 90% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6684587814 68% => OK
Sentence length: 30.3571428571 20.5533526081 148% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6957695938 48.84282405 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 181.714285714 120.699889404 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.3571428571 20.5533526081 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.644075263715 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.54480286738 126% => OK
Readability: 55.768907563 45.7405998639 122% => OK
Elegance: 1.63492063492 1.45489161554 112% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365558398294 0.300154397459 122% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.166846030879 0.103427244359 161% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.062704505282 0.0752933317313 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.609662212014 0.497263757937 123% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.110906936822 0.151897553556 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164916015891 0.114077575197 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709522241207 0.0781384742642 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.301908323947 0.336927656856 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0379164766031 0.067059652881 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239503570064 0.210909579961 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543765798683 0.0618886996521 88% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.91756272401 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.