Every one has their own strategy to do their job, and all of them have their own strength and weaknesses. I strongly believe that workers would gain more satisfaction if they have several types of tasks to do while others hold the opposite ideas. Someone can consiously weigh the pros and cons of each side. The explanations will be explored in the following essay.
First, the diversity of tasks done by workers cause a sufficient reduction in routine. Repeating same tasks lead to the worker to become bored of his job. Whenever the members of any company would become low motivated, this will smash it down dreadfully. On the other hand, trying to do different types of tasks is beneficial for them to employ all the energy in finalizing tasks and satisfy the workers with achieving success.
Another interesting reason is that assigning myriad tasks to workers increase their creativity. Even though doing the same task cause the worker to master it, he will only be aware of one task. However, variability in the job encourages workers to squeeze every thought in their minds. No one can argue that fresh ideas are essential to be efficient and productive. Also, with increasing competition, different duties would galvanize workers to be the best in what they do. For example, variety in job description increases the number of workers doing the same task. In order to be unique, a worker must employ all his efforts in job completion. This saves time and effort on the company as a whole, and would rise it to the peak.
Furthermore, satisfaction gained from different tasks uplift workers to be promoted. Completing an advantageous different jobs by crafting new projects and substantiating interior qualities is the ideal way to reach that. An employee who masters different types of tasks like selling, promoting, advertising and accounting will have a bigger opportunity to be localized to a management position.
As a conclusion, the variety in the tasks of the workers would dramatically increase the level of satisfaction in their job. This would definitely have a bright impact on the personal job experience and on the company as a whole entity.
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I really don't know what to
I really don't know what to do. Helpppp
The final score should be 21
The final score should be 21-22. The e-grader heavily depends on automated_readability_index and the integer 11 is set up as the baseline for good and bad essays. (11 means the level is equal to a high school student who is in grade 11). Unfortunately, your automated_readability_index is 10.8 which is less than 11.
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92%
while most of users are 12 or over for automated_readability_index.
To get higher marks in the future essays, We are expecting at least:
No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
for this essay, the No. of Words is 361 which is over 350, but
No. of Different Words is 191. it is still less than 200
so the final solution:
more content with more different words.
the structure of this essay is pretty good, you can follow it in the future essays.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: BORED_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'bored with'?
Suggestion: bored with
...same tasks lead to the worker to become bored of his job. Whenever the members of any co...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 127, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ompleting an advantageous different jobs by crafting new projects and substantiat...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, so, while, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1813.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 361.0 407.700716846 89% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02216066482 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80967004238 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534626038781 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2708887102 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3333333333 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1904761905 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.80952380952 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280569090917 0.236089414692 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893871616656 0.076458572812 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793341117323 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166795264165 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542427455869 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.