Most of the people prefer to have an exciting life and will be boring when they have to do the same thing all the day. Hence, when they are doing their jobs or daily duties, they should consider this fact. For instance, in my view, workers will be more satisfied when they do a variety of duties during the workday. I will elaborate my opinion on the following reasons.
First and foremost, when workers have a lot of tasks to do, the working process will be extremely interesting and exciting for them. They will enjoy working, consequently, their efficiency will increase. On the other hand, when the workers do the same affair during the day, it will be boring for them and they just concentrate on the end of the day and going home. Therefore, their output will extremely decrease.
Furthermore, workers that have a variety of tasks to do during the day can save time. Because they can determine a specific time for doing each task, hence, they will do all the tasks quickly; consequently, they will optimize the time-consuming. For instance, whenever I arrange my daily schedule with different duties, I finish all of them more quickly rather than doing the same thing all the day.
Admittedly, doing a variety of tasks during the day will increase the self-confidence of the workers. Each worker has special skills and can do some affairs better than others and by doing a variety of things, they will be able to determine their talents. Consequently, their self-confidence will increase and they will be satisfied with their jobs. For instance, when I was working in a lab for one year, I perceive that I can do some experiments more precisely than other students, hence, my confidence increased.
Due to the aforementioned grounds, I believe that workers will be more satisfied when they have a different variety of affairs for doing during a day.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, for instance, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 320.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81875 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72118425506 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 212.727598566 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.425 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 469.8 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5494811898 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.375 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366903568193 0.236089414692 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159762559086 0.076458572812 209% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0930002619194 0.0737576698707 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270981647039 0.150856017488 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601469363855 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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