Nowadays, parents are so busy to spend times with their children. Some people buy for their children a variety of game or register them in the sport club. On the other hand, others ask their kids to done their homework and spend the most of the time on schoolwork. In my opinion, It is better to our child to do some schoolwork because it helps to improve their creativity and homework would elevate their knowledge.
Thinking about creativity comes from facing new challenges which gain by doing the schoolwork. To give an example, a mathematics teacher taught some formula to their students and make some extra question for their homework. In addition, he encourages them to use their creativity to solve the questions. Also, young adult is going to compete with another classmate to gain better result and more attention from their teacher.
Moreover, when children attempt to study in order to solve questions, they have gained knowledge by reading books. For instance, a geology teacher asks their students to write an essay about stones type and where we can find them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 1977.66487455 45% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 182.0 407.700716846 45% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93406593407 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 4.48103885553 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48978107098 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 212.727598566 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653846153846 0.524837075471 125% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 618.680645161 44% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.0091649168 48.9658058833 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.8 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 5.45110844103 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243588667637 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102726721267 0.076458572812 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760132199986 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152677584786 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0847665582205 0.0645574589148 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 86.8835125448 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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