These days that most of the parents go to work and usually spend less time with their children, training children become an important issue for the parents. Some parents concern about the children's schoolwork, however, others prefer to play a game and make pleasure time with their children. In my view, doing things that are related to the children's schoolwork is better than other things. I will elaborate my opinion on the following reasons.
First and foremost, the parents can attract the children to the school and teach them new things. The parents are the most impressive people in the future of their children, hence, they should lead them how to enjoy learning. For instance, they can take the children to nature and show them how birds make their nests. Therefore, spending time on the children's schoolwork is more necessary than playing games with them.
Furthermore, the children will perceive that schoolwork is extremely important for their future. When parents take time for their schoolwork, the children will realize that schoolwork is an important issue Hence, they will do them seriously and try to get good grades. Also, for being thankful for their parent's works and making them happy, the children will study hard to be a good student.
Admittedly, the children can do the games with their friend, but, they rarely study with them. When the children are alone or with their friends, they usually prefer to play a game to have a pleasant time. Hence, the parents do not need to be concern about the playing with the children. For instance, when I was a student in the elementary school, usually play a game with my friends or classmates and I have never studied with them. Therefore, the parents should spend time on the learning of children instead of playing with them.
All in all, I believe that spending the time to play with the children is not a good idea for those parents that do not have enough time. Those parents should spend time for doing interesting things that are related to the children's schoolwork because the children will attract to learning and be a successful person in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 332, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d be a successful person in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, so, therefore, for instance, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1770.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 363.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87603305785 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41589471854 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 212.727598566 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.399449035813 0.524837075471 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.9 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5947618639 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3333333333 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1666666667 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332060173731 0.236089414692 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143583709015 0.076458572812 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0929321462068 0.0737576698707 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228968517133 0.150856017488 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.083330990953 0.0645574589148 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.63 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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