For the overall development of a child, both education and extra curriculum activities play a crucial role. Busy parents should understand what they are missing out to make their kids happy and occupied. Only pressuring on school works would make them reluctant to spend time with parents. Because there is no fun doing mundane jobs even in less time they have to spend with them. In the same, playing games and sports most of time would not help children to be focused in study. So, it is the prime duty of parents to make most out of their available time for kids. I think when busy parents do not have a lot of time to spend with their children, the best use of that time is to have fun playing games or sports as well as doing school works in fun way that interests them. They have to make a balance between the recreation and education. This will help kids grow properly with developed mental and physical health.
First, being a parent is not a easy job. One has to sacrifice blood and sweat to provide their offspring a better life. Thus, during the busy life schedule, when they are unable to make time for their kids, whenever they get time, have to do best out of it. Playing their favourite sports will energise them. This will make the bond strong between the parents and children. They will cherish the attention given. For an instance, discussing about the favourite footballer with the kid who is football fanatic. This will make him more attentive in the discussion.
Second, along with recreation, parents are responsible for helping their kids on school works. Parents are the first teachers and home is the foundation of whatever we learn in beginning of our life. Therefore, no parent can have an excuse of being busy for neglecting their wards education. Pressurising only in studies would not help. So, they have to aggregate school works with some fun tasks which would make them excited to do it. For an instance, while doing science project work, they can be shown the interesting animations and videos related to the topic that will help them to be more determined to do their works. Or they can provide break in between doing such tasks where they can incorporate some funny games. This will make the learning experience more fun. Both parents and kids will undoubtedly love it.
Third, everyone has to make time for the important person in lives so, will the busy parents? Definitely, they will. For me, to make the best out of the time is making children enjoy company of parents doing something significant. Games, sports, entertainment and education, all of them are part of life. Parents have to focus in every area for the betterment of their kids. This will broaden the mind of children and irrespective of differences, will be able to zeal with their parents. They will also learn how to make time for family and how to be a successful parent. They will take their parent as a role model. Hence, this will ameliorate the relationship between parents and kids, letting no negetive vibes around them.
In conclusion, a parent is an instrumental part of a child. Providing time to the kids is essential for their growth. However, busy parents have to learn to manage their time to play, speak, teach, enjoy and share feelings with their kids. Only giving facilities doesn't fulfil the duty of parents, they have to make time regardless their busy schedule. They have to spend it wisely so that kids can have amiable bonding with them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 30, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...health. First, being a parent is not a easy job. One has to sacrifice blood an...
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Line 9, column 264, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...with their kids. Only giving facilities doesnt fulfil the duty of parents, they have t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, second, so, therefore, third, thus, well, while, as to, i think, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 25.0 9.8082437276 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 79.0 52.1666666667 151% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2871.0 1977.66487455 145% => OK
No of words: 607.0 407.700716846 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72981878089 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.96360453597 4.48103885553 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40695817755 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 263.0 212.727598566 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.433278418451 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 873.0 618.680645161 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 40.0 20.6003584229 194% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7225748008 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.775 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.175 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.075 5.45110844103 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 26.0 11.8709677419 219% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336892928211 0.236089414692 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924581478822 0.076458572812 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102169649307 0.0737576698707 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238130564625 0.150856017488 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0930173869559 0.0645574589148 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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