In my personal point of view I'm totally agree with it is important to know about events happening around the world to get involved in one of these events and be aware about it and to share with other people worldwide to get experience.
First of all, to be involved in any events you have to be aware about what happening around you worldwide. What I mean is, there is a lot of events surrounding us even daily or months. Also these events may be important to us and maybe not. But in general you have to aware about these events to get knowledge to share and cope with the international word. For example from my personal experience, I remember last year I was working at multinational company as a pharmacist and during this year I hear about the American academy meeting for ophthalmic field. I would able to attend this conference and get a lot of knowledge about the new trials updates. As a New York times, it states that 80 percent from people they know about the new events that happening worldwide they have good experience and more opportunities more than people they do not.
Second, to share with other people worldwide you have to know what are happening around you. What I mean is, there is a lot of events happening in the world may be related to science, poilitical, social, and educational. there is a good opportunity to share with others in any one of these events at anytime once you know any information about these events. for instance, as I mentioned before last year I attended the American academy meeting at USA. I would be able to meet a lot of doctors from different cultures and have different point of view. furthermore I could to get a lot of experience and sharing our updates that how we can get experience from these events. A recent survey revealed that people how sharing their updates with different community and cultures they improve their skills by 20 percent more people they do not.
In conclusion when considering attend one of these events and sharing updates with other people from different cultures. I strongly believe that it is important to know about events happening around the world.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'for example', 'for instance', 'i mean', 'in conclusion', 'in general', 'you know', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.212345679012 0.229887763892 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.162962962963 0.158761421928 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0864197530864 0.0866891130778 100% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0271604938272 0.046263068375 59% => OK
Pronouns: 0.083950617284 0.0685040099705 123% => OK
Prepositions: 0.158024691358 0.118717715034 133% => OK
Participles: 0.037037037037 0.0351676179071 105% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.59567493047 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0444444444444 0.0309702414327 144% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0716049382716 0.0887237588012 81% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0148148148148 0.0209618222197 71% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0172839506173 0.0139019557991 124% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2171.0 2387.08602151 91% => OK
No of words: 378.0 408.028673835 93% => OK
Chars per words: 5.74338624339 5.86048508987 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48200974243 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.312169312169 0.338922669872 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.219576719577 0.251872472559 87% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.148148148148 0.174417080927 85% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.111111111111 0.112833075102 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59567493047 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.402116402116 0.524397521467 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 41.5603360257 59.2087087015 70% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6684587814 82% => OK
Sentence length: 22.2352941176 20.5533526081 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7314430689 48.84282405 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.705882353 120.699889404 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2352941176 20.5533526081 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.882352941176 0.644075263715 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.54480286738 180% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 44.1929660753 45.7405998639 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.48648648649 1.45489161554 102% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321161483634 0.300154397459 107% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.130390029005 0.103427244359 126% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0913941552656 0.0752933317313 121% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.469013792115 0.497263757937 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.171945314887 0.151897553556 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140464421376 0.114077575197 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110006882644 0.0781384742642 141% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.536780271939 0.336927656856 159% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0568244352909 0.067059652881 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.272398048351 0.210909579961 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345195248374 0.0618886996521 56% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.91756272401 142% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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