There are certain considerations one can take into account to investigate and examine the issue on whether we should know events happened everyday around the world. Someone contends that it is a waste of time because most of them have of no relation to us. However, I asserts it is necessary to do so, especially for young people who want to be competitive in a globalized world.
First and foremost, it assists people to keep up with the pace of the whole world. Nowadays, the world swifts quickly and everyone is experiencing great changes in different fields like transportation, technology and science all the time. If we close our eyes to what is going on around us, which seems unrelated to our daily life, we will soon be left behind by the trend of development. Thus, it is vividly clear it is of vital significance for everyone to care about our globe by reading news on the internet or watching TV everyday.
Furthermore, preparing for future jobs is another noticeable factor for young adults. With the rapid trend of globalization and internationalization, the chances are one will always work with others from different culture background in the same group. In this circumstance, mutual understandings of others' culture makes cooperation much easier and more comfortable. For those who never pay attention to events happened in other parts of the world, it is impossible for them to have a knowledge about other culture context, therefore making them less competitive in the workplace.
Last but not least, an additional support comes to mind is it contributes to a broader horizon and knowledge. No one can deny the enormous cultural diversity in this world, and knowing what has going on around the whole world offers ordinary people a precious opportunity to know the world better. For example, I watched how western countries celebrate the Christmas when I was a young boy on television, which stimulated my interests about western culture, and made me determined to study abroad in the future from that time.
For aforementioned ground, all folks should bear in mind that caring about the events occur around the world will have profits sometime in our lifetime, although it may seem as if it is of no use to spend time on something that are not likely to affect our life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 269, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'assert'
Suggestion: assert
...m have of no relation to us. However, I asserts it is necessary to do so, especially fo...
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Line 3, column 528, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ing news on the internet or watching TV everyday. Furthermore, preparing for future j...
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Line 9, column 193, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
... although it may seem as if it is of no use to spend time on something that are not...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1915.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 388.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93556701031 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91577098333 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572164948454 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 609.3 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9959827508 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.666666667 100.406767564 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8666666667 20.6045352989 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173757863467 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529579480642 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463763621391 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100443354174 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0201594537382 0.0645574589148 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.