In the modern time, different events happen in the world, from the war in the middle east to the bullying in the US schools. Many people hold the view that there is no need for us to know those things which could have little impact on our life. In the contrast, from my perspective, I strongly hold the counterargument that we should know those things even if it seems unrelated with us.
To begin with, the first reason is that knowing those event could help someone to deal with some similar situations in the future. People grows based on their past experience. To illustrate this idea, I would like to mentions the post in the Weibo, one of social website just like Facebook in USA. There are plenty of quarrels of couples in my timeline, usually posted by my friends. It seems can be hardly related to me since I do not like to gossip about other's private life. However, I still like to read those details and analyze it, because I also have a girlfriend. By learning the reason and the solution of those conflicts between couples, I could solve or avoid those disharmony between me and my girlfriends in the future. In this case, we could still learn something from those event having no impact on my life.
Another reason to endorse my view is that in the information age, the ability to get and analyze information is important for an individual. To be specific, the reason lies in the fact that by knowing those event and analyze the rules behind it, one would always find something useful. The discover the gravity, for instance, could be an example. It is said that one day, when Newton was standing under a apple tree, he was hit by a falling apple, which inspired him to find the gravity. Whether it is true or not, it still can tell as that something unlikely to affect our life, just as the apple which would fall to the ground like everything in the earth, could help us to find some interesting even important things behind it. Consequently, I would like to support that we should know those things which seems unimportant to our daily life.
It is partially reasonable that we do not need to know something unimportant. However, it is based on a unwarranted basement that we have already know that it is important. In effect, just as that old saying goes, life is like a box of chocolate, you never know what you will get. When the economical crisis happened in wall street, there are still many people did not believe that it would influence the whole world in the following years.
To sum up, it can be hard to definitely claim that, especially in the real world where there are various complicated situations. Nevertheless, after contemplation, I would uphold the point of view that it is important to know those trivial which seems unrelated to us.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 49, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this event' or 'those events'?
Suggestion: this event; those events
... with, the first reason is that knowing those event could help someone to deal with some si...
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Line 3, column 160, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
...the future. People grows based on their past experience. To illustrate this idea, I would like ...
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Line 3, column 218, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'mention'.
Suggestion: mention
...o illustrate this idea, I would like to mentions the post in the Weibo, one of social we...
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Line 3, column 672, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this disharmony' or 'those disharmonies'?
Suggestion: this disharmony; those disharmonies
...between couples, I could solve or avoid those disharmony between me and my girlfriends in the fu...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...girlfriends in the future. In this case, we could still learn something from thos...
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Line 3, column 785, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this event' or 'those events'?
Suggestion: this event; those events
...e, we could still learn something from those event having no impact on my life. Anothe...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ose event having no impact on my life. Another reason to endorse my view is tha...
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Line 5, column 202, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this event' or 'those events'?
Suggestion: this event; those events
...reason lies in the fact that by knowing those event and analyze the rules behind it, one wo...
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Line 5, column 287, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...one would always find something useful. The discover the gravity, for instance, could be an ...
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Line 5, column 404, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...one day, when Newton was standing under a apple tree, he was hit by a falling app...
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Line 5, column 666, Rule ID: HELP_TO_FIND[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help us find' instead.
Suggestion: help us find
...und like everything in the earth, could help us to find some interesting even important things ...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ng unimportant. However, it is based on a unwarranted basement that we have alrea...
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Line 7, column 147, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'known'.
Suggestion: known
...warranted basement that we have already know that it is important. In effect, just a...
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Line 7, column 291, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
... never know what you will get. When the economical crisis happened in wall street, there a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, for instance, it is true, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 23.0 11.0286738351 209% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 75.0 43.0788530466 174% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 78.0 52.1666666667 150% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2287.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 496.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61088709677 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71922212354 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53242419709 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473790322581 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 711.9 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5854702106 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4347826087 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5652173913 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163526622137 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478569948531 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398014660933 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980386151026 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370553198295 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.